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发表于 2016-7-10 22:39:14
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书面表达训练 (议论文 结合图表发表观点)(六)
假设你是李华.你将代表学校参加国际中学生论坛,就你所在城市的教育状况发表演讲。请根据以下两幅图表,介绍你市高中学生构成情况及毕业去向的选择,并针对两幅图表中的数据所反映的情况发表你自己的看法。
注意:1.文章开头和结尾已经给出;2.词数100左右(不包括已给部分)
3. 参考词汇: 图表: chart 职业学校: vocational school
外来务工人员: non-local workers
范文:
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I'm going to talk about the high school education of my city.
From Chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. Another 1 percent are foreigner students.
As is shown in chart 2, sixty percent of them intend to go to university, which is double the number of those who will attend vocational schools. Besides, the other ten percent choose to go abroad for further study.
In conclusion, it seems clear that our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers, whose children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city students. Also with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up businesses here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture. In addition, we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago.
I believe the future of the education in our city is promising!
That's all. Thank you.
07扬州一模试卷书面表达范文:
Different Sources of Income Between Chinese and American Students
These two charts show the differences in the sources of income between Chinese and American students. As is shown in the charts, Chinese students get 90 percent of their income from their parents while American students get only 50 percent from parents. Besides, for Chinese students, income from doing part time jobs makes up only 5 percent of the total. So does income from scholarships. However, money from part time jobs and scholarships for American students amount to 35 and 15 percent respectively.
From the analysis above, we can easily find out the reasons. Chinese parents like to take more care of their children. They’d rather work hard and save money in order to provide their children with everything they need. American parents, on the other hand, like to pay more attention to the development of children’s ability to be independent. They would rather encourage their children to support themselves. As for students, Chinese students tend to depend on parents while American students think it natural to depend on themselves.
单句改错:
1. American students get 50% of their income from parents. While in China, 90% of the students’ income come from parents.
2. It causes the students in China don’t want to do part-time work to earn money.
3. American students are more indepent while Chinese students always depend their parents.
4. Besides the income from parents, who make up 50%, 35% of American students’ income are from their part-time jobs.
5. There is about 35% of the income comes from part-time jobs.
6. As is shown in the charts that half of the income of American students is from parents.
7. Chinese students are easier to depend on their parents.
8. Chinese parents don’t like American parents who attach great importance to their independence.
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