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2015年12月大学英语四级写作模板:讨好他人

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  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the following topic. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. You should write at least 120 words but no more than180 words.
          Should we please everybody?
          【参考范文】
          Nowadays, people put more and more emphasis on interpersonal relationship. Some say that they should please everybody if they want to maintain extensive interpersonal circle. Some say that there is no need to please everybody and good interpersonal relationship builds not on pleasing everybody..
          As far as I am concerned, I favor the latter. Firstly, as different people have different personalities, and if we please everybody, we will become very tired. Secondly, as some people think and feel differently from us, we need to hide our true thoughts and feelings if we please everybody. Consequently, some people will not pay attention to our thoughts and feelings anymore.
          In conclusion, it is not worthwhile to please everybody. Good interpersonal relationship needs our sincerity, integrity and honesty rather than flattering and hypocrisy.
          【高分表达】
          put more and more emphasis on... 越来越重视……
          extensive 广泛的
          interpersonal circle 人际圈
          build on... 以……为基础
          consequently 因此(表结果)
          Good interpersonal relationship needs our sincerity, integrity and honesty rather than flattering and hypocrisy. 良好的人际关系需要我们真诚、正直、诚实而不是奉承和虚伪。
       

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