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发表于 2016-7-11 18:43:46 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  题目: Bicycles: An Important Means of Transport in China
  提纲:  (1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及
  (2)和汽车的比较                 (3)自行车在中国的前途
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  Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people --man and woman, old and young--ride theft bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called "the kingdom of bicycles."
  Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.
          In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country, and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.
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