真题如下：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people’s life and then explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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(图片来源：网络；题目中英文内容：People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see)
解析：
传统的作文归类方式，如观点对比、问题解决或按图画、图表或名言警句类划分的方式正逐渐退出历史舞台。
相反，按照题目要求写相应的“功能段落”和表达是答题的永恒方式，永远不会因为出题方式的改变而失效。
显然，试题未要求考生给作文命题，更没有要求考生抄写题目，所以不写题目丝毫不影响成绩。题目写对了当然也不会加分，但题目写错了得分必受影响。
本篇作文体裁明确，话题清晰，内容要求具体，即：简要解释手机的过度使用并分析其可能产生的后果。
可以看出，题目明确要求写的“现象”、“危害”，此外可写的是“建议”。
首段：图画解释描述（改写）
Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: a host of people are crossing the street; to our great shock, they focus all their eyesight on cell phones rather than the road, and in order to see, they rely on their walking sticks.
Such a picture can be naturally associated with people’s overuse of mobile phones: if we intend to enjoy a harmonious and safe life, it is advisable for us to reject negative impacts of cell phones. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for people to purchase, own and use cell phones in daily life. Meanwhile, an increasing of individuals find that mobiles phones are overused. Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like scene in the picture: students concentrate on cell phones in class; youngsters concentrate on cell phones in family. It is overuse of cell phones that enables us to ignore people around us and even to put us in danger. As a matter fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the negative impacts of cell phones.
As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to refuse to be the slave of cell phones. Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to spend more time communicating with others face to face. Do bear in mind: cell phones are just our tool. (总字数：232词，可以将中间段砍掉开头两句或尾段砍掉最后两句)
思路简析：
首段图画描述，改写图片提示信息即可。
二段首句点明主题并对主题简评，二句概述图片所指现象，三句相关人感受，四句排法举例，五句万能表达（强调句式）指出其危害，六句总结。
尾段首句表述自己观点，二句提出号召建议，尾句展望未来。
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发表于 2016-7-11 18:15:06