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预测作文话题：
Opening Psychological Courses
1. 许多人建议大学开设心理课程
2. 我对这一问题的看法
作文范文：
Recently more and more educator and common citizens suggest that
universities colleges open more courses which are helpful for students'
psychological health. Personally, I fully agree with their proposal for the
following reasons.
On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and
job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychological problems such as
anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological courses open a door
for communication and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teach
students how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which
is a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network.
Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental
and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society,
students have to do more than study hard.
In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in
universities. In my mind, they are good for students' psychological
development.
点评：
首段提出主题，其中第二句为过渡句，引出下文;第二段提出三点同意的理由;最后一段得出结论，与第一段首句呼应，其中第二句是解释型的补充说明句。
范文首段提出许多人建议大学开设心理课程。作者同意这一建议，并分三点在第二段中叙述理由。首先，目前的学习以及将来的就业压力需要开设心理课程。其次，教会学生如何调整在不同环境下的情绪。最后，给学生介绍有利于其身心健康的好习惯。第三段总结呼应首段内容。
第二段第一点中的ever-increasing表示“一直在增加的”，修饰两个名词词组，对比鲜明，at the moment表示“现在”，in the
future表示“将来”，open a door
for…表示“开启了……之门”;第二点中的regulate表示“调节，控制”;第三点中的conducive表示“有益于……的”，后接介词to。
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发表于 2016-7-11 08:56:18