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热点演练5
Directions :For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition on the topic High Expenditure of College Students . You should write
at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in
CHinese :
1.现在很多大学生没有节制，不懂得节俭。
2.造成这种现象的原因有哪些?
3.你怎样看待?
参考范文
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇说明现象类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段概述大学生花钱没有节制的现象;第二段说明造成大学生这种消费习惯的原因;第三段谈谈“我”对这种消费习惯的看法并给出相关建议。
High Expenditure of College Students
In recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on
the sharp rise . Many college students spend money like water and have no
concept of thrift in their mind . They buy whatever they like without
considering the price and their families' financial ability .
There are three main reasons behind this phenomenon . Firstly , some
parents and grandparents spoil children so much that they think their spending
money as they wish should get little cause for criticism . Secondly , with the
improvement of living standard , parents can afford higher expenditure of their
children . Finally , various fashionable goods have great attraction to young
students . To buy them certainly needs more money .
From my point of view , it is unhealthy for us college students to hae this
kind of spending habit . Whether the financial condition of our family allows
our extravagant spending or not , we should limit our expenditure on daily
necessities . Learning to be thrifty can help us form right values and is
favorable to our future development .
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发表于 2016-7-11 08:55:12