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热点演练2
Directions :For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition on the topic Recreational Activities . You should write at least 120
words following the outline given below in CHinese :
1.现在有很多青少年出国留学。
2.有些人认为这种做法是有益的，有些人则认为这样做是不对的。
3.我的看法。
参考范文
框架搭建：由标题和提纲所列内容可知，本文应为一篇对比分析类作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段指出人们对青少年出国留学现象的不同看法，继而表明“我”的态度;第二段先指出青少年出国留学有一定好处，然后转折表明“我”的相反观点;第三段陈述理由论证“我”的观点的正确性。
Teenagers' Studying Abroad
Nowadays it seems that there are more and more teenagers who choose to
study abroad . Some people think it will certainly do good to the children ,
while others insist it may not be a good choice . As for me , Iprefer to the
latter opinion .
Of course , some children might benefit from studying abroad . For example
, the independent life might make them learn confidence and perseverance . But
it doesn't mean that it is a right thing to send a teenager to study abroad .
From my point of view , it has a great risk to do this .
The following reasons can support my argument . First , the quality of
overseas education is not necessary higher than that of our education . Indeed ,
some foreign schools aim at earning money . Second , early independent life may
be harmful to the child , if he cannot receive proper guidance and tender care
from both teachers and parents . To conclude , I think it is necessary for young
students to make a careful consideration before going abroad .
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发表于 2016-7-11 08:55:11