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Health and Wealth, Which Do You Prefer?
"Health is wealth!". This is an old saying which the majority applaud. As a
rule, the wealthieryou are, the weaker is your health, but this cannot be
applied to all.
To begin with, a person that has health can afford to challenge all
hardships. For example, manual workers are usually stout and energetic. With
their energy, they earn their living. Although such an occupation brings little
reward as compared with the energy they haveexerted, they enjoy life whatever
things may be.
Moreover, business is based on health. Students in good health can absorb
knowledge morereadily. In good health, scientists can tackle complex technical
problems and achieve moresuccess.
Frequently we find millionaires cling close to their doctors for they
seldom have enoughexercises to bring forth better health. Their lack of
exercises slackens the readiness of growth ofthe antibodies to resist the at
tack of diseases. So, my argue is that health is more importantthan wealth for
if we do not have health, what can we benefit from wealth?
CET6六级作文结构分析：
·Health is wealth
* More wealth, weaker health
·Good health can afford to challenge all hardships, e.g.
* Manual workers
* Businessmen
* Students
* Scientists
* Millionaires lack health
·Conclusion
No health, no wealth
CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇议论文, 文中作者的观点鲜明, 全文均围绕这一观点展开, 每段的第一都是主题句, 结论句与第一句呼应,
这种首尾呼应的写作技巧很值得学习。
CET6六级作文万能句型：
applaud v. 赞同
cannot be applied to all 并不适用于所有人
hardship n. 困难
manual worker 体力劳动者
stout and energetic 健壮而精力充沛
earn their living 谋生
occupation n. 职业
the energy they have exerted 所出的力
absorb v. 吸收
tackle v. 解决, 处理
cling close to their doctors 总离不开医生
slackens the readiness of growth of the antibodies 放松体内增长抗体的准备 |
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发表于 2018-12-8 10:25:41