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2018年12月英语六级作文精讲:谈谈你对溺爱的看法

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发表于 2018-8-4 09:07:16 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  "Nowadays parents are too permissive with their children." Do you agree or
disagree with this statement?

          谈谈你对父母溺爱孩子这种现象的看法
          Today, few people would defend the traditional attitude to children. If you
recall what happened in old days, you would be astonished at the severe and
strict education for children, for instance, old-fashioned spanking was common
punishment for children. As a result, while the parents thus established their
own authority, the poor children would never recover from the dreadful traumatic
experience when they grew up.
          However, as you know, things often go to extremes. Nowadays, parents'
confidence in their own authority has been greatly undermined. Countless
articles in magazines and newspapers and tv programmes publicize child care.
When so much over-enthusiastic advice flying about, mum and dad just don't know
what to do any more. In the end, they do nothing.
          So from early childhood, the kids are in charge and parents' lives are
regulated according to the needs of their offspring. When the little dears
develop into teenagers, they take complete control. If the young people are
going to have a party, for example, parents are asked to leave the house. Their
presence merely spoils the fun. What else can the poor parents do but obey?
          In my mind, a child certainly needs love, and a lot of it. But the
excessive permissiveness of modern parents is surely doing more harm than good.
The spread of juvenile delinquency is largely due to parental laxity. Mother,
believing that her little baby can look after himself, is not at home when he
returns from school, so little baby roams the street. The dividing-line between
permissiveness and sheer negligence is very fine indeed.
          作文结构分析:
          ·severe and strict education for children
          * spanking
          * children's dreadful experience
          ·things often go to extremes
          * parents' authority unde rmined
          * over-enthusiastic child care
          * parents'life regulated according to children's needs
          ·comments
          * excessive permissiveness and sheer negligence — a fine dividing line
          作文内容分析:
          本文是一篇议论文。显然作者的观点是认同这一命题中的说法的。文章以对比的手法将早先对待小孩的传统教育方式作为铺衬,然后以一句“however,
things often go to extremes.”为转折,将话题导入主题“nowadays parents are too permissive
with their children.”例证真实而生动,有较强的说服力。最后一段是作者的观点和评论。本文逻辑性强,层次分明,读来统一而连贯。
          单词词组:
          permissive (ness) a.(n.) 随意(的) ,放纵(的)
          be astonished at 对……感到吃惊
          spank (ing) v.(n.) 打屁股
          traumatic a. 受到创伤的
          things often go to extremes. 事情往往会走向极端
          undermine v. 瓦解
          regulate v. 调节
          offspring n. 儿女
          dear n. 亲爱的人
          obey v. 服从
          juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪
          parental laxity 父母的疏忽
          roam v. 游荡
          dividing-line 分界线
          sheer negligence 完全忽视
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