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一、描述段
作文首段为描述段，描述段的内容大概包括两个方面：1、描述图画内容。2、揭示寓意。
第一句：描述句——描述图画内容
1、一幅图画
A、The cartoon describes a very common phenomenon in our society that
内容-SVO.
B、As can be seen from the picture ,(there is)内容-SVO.
2、两幅图画
A、The set of drawings describe a very common phenomenon in our society that
内容-SVO.
B、Presenting totally different /sharply contrasted scenes, the two pictures
suggest that 内容-SVO.
第二句：引出话题
1、社会热点现象
In recent years , along with the tremendous advance of the society , 主题has
become a hot issue of the general public , especially for those who are
confronted with the situation .
2、社会热点问题
Nothing can be more serious (upsetting, outstanding, meaningful…) than the
issue of…
3、良好品质
第三句：主题句——进一步引出主题
It is most likely that by drawing the picture, the drawer intends not only
to tell us the story of … but also to let us think more about 主题.This is
something we should give more thought to.
二、主旨段
主旨段是全文表情达意最重要的一段，因此内容应该很详实。主要分两步走。
第一步：围绕主题，进一步阐述图片中关于主题所表现出的两个or三个方面
A、After carefully thinking and reflection , we come to understand the
enlightening picture step by step . I believe that this thought-provoking
picture conveys two layers of meanings. For one thing 方面1-SVO. For another
方面2-SVO. This simple picture wakes up the whole of the society.
B、Having scrutinized the details of the pictures, we can discuss the
implications subtly conveyed from it. For one thing 方面1-SVO. For another
方面2-SVO.This simple picture wakes up the whole of the society.
第二步：围绕主题，进一步阐述图片中出现的现象的两个原因or两个方面
A、There are several driving forces this trend/phenomenon. The main reason
is no other than that 原因1-SVO .What’s more,原因2-SVO.原因3-SVO also plays a role in
this case.
B、To account for the above mentioned phenomenon (issue, tendency) various
reasons (causes) have been put forward. In the very beginning 原因1-SVO.And then
原因2-SVO.What is more, last but 原因2-SVO.
三、总结段
最后一段是总结段，这段的主要内容应该包括三个方面的内容，如下：
1、一般趋势的建议(评论)。
2、良好品质的赞扬(举例)。
3、反面现象的解决方法(措施)。
1.评论
Taking into account the factors above, we can safely draw a conclusion
that主旨(不多写、简单句). On one hand 建议1-SVO. On the other hand 建议2- SVO.
I believe then the relationship between people will be harmonious and our
society will be a better place for us to live in.(社会和谐)
In order to make our world a better place in which to live, we must learn
to live in harmony with the nature. (自然和谐)
2.举例
What the thought-provoking picture illustrates is a common phenomenon in
contemporary society. Examples to prove the view are abundant. It can be given a
concrete example 举例1-SVO . Another good case in point is that 举例2-SVO. In my
belief, 主旨-SVO is extremely significant to all of us in our society. We should
translate it into proper action in daily life, and then we will benefit from
it.
3.措施
Then, what can we do to deal with the problem have become a concern to many
people. From my views, the following measures should be attached importance to.
To begin with , we should appeal to the government to make relevant laws(plans,
rules) and carry out a series of policy to 跟主旨相关内容 to guarantee a proper order
and justice. What’s more , we should enhance the awareness of people that 主题 is
vital to us . The general public should also made realization that any prompt
solution is of benefit to all. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this
difficulty, and we will have a brighter future.
对于考研英语来说，最容易提分的部分是写作，但如果只是单纯套用模板，只会导致句型和实际写作内容不匹配，而且按部就班只会让文章千篇一律，没有新意。因此同学在练习时要注意审题和构思，活用模板，同时也要适当加入自己的内容，尤其是注意积累当下热点话题的素材。 |
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发表于 2017-12-18 20:35:48