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考研英语作文模板到底怎么用?(附大作文模板)

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发表于 2017-12-18 20:35:47 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  说到英语模板,这始终是我们绕不过去的一个问题,大家是对它又爱又恨。爱它是因为它能解决很多问题;恨它是因为好的、个性化的模版太难找,千篇一律变“死板”。
          关于英语模板现在有两种论调:
          “反模板论”
          ~模板痕迹太明显,作文千篇一律,没有什么亮点。
          ~阅卷老师一般对模板都特别反感,分数一定高不了
          “唯模板论”
          ~模板可以预先规定好写作的框架,帮助我快速构思出每一段大致要写的内容。
          ~通过背诵模板,可以有效弥补我的词汇和句式匮乏,从遣词造句上迅速提升作文的水准。
          现在详细解释一下模板到底能不能用:
          1. 高分还是低分的主要因素,不是用没用模板,而是语言质量是否高级,是否出现特别低级的语言错误。
          如果自己写的漏洞百出,甚至模板都能默写错,那就是你自己的问题了。
          2. 无论模板与否,阅卷人没有任何理由跟一篇完全写对了的文章过不去。
          3. “模板痕迹”是典型的伪命题,不存在的。
          真实情况是:一些考生在使用模板的过程中,模板以外的部分出现了局部“致命”的错误,才导致了真实水平被阅卷人判断出来,从而分数特别低。
          主要问题有三个方面:一,模板背诵、默写错误;二、自己填写部分的语法错误;三、模板内容选择跟文章不对应。
          所以,适度使用模板是利大于弊的。因为当多数内容有了模板的铺垫,这时只要将精力集中在模板里自己填入的部分,从而大大降低错误率。
          下面放送英语大作文模板:
          通用模板:
          正面话题模板
          As is shown above, in the middle of the cartoon stands + 主题词,which
symbolizes + 主题词的另一种表达,+ 同位语即主题词第三种表达 + 表示主题词动作的非谓语动词 (例如:in the middle of the
cartoon stands a hot pot,which symbolizes culture,the one containing many
Chinese culture symbol. The drawer’s intention seems to be highly self-evident
and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It is therefore safe to draw
the conclusion that + 主题词 + is momentous and fundamental to the mind what food
is vital and significant to the body.)
          Not only I, but also the best philosophers and poets also praise that this
concept should be a permanent universal values. Obviously, I can think of no
better reasons for the phenomenon other than the following two. Initially, the
millennia-long run of + 主题词 + left us with a lot of traditions that are
extremely profoundly rooted. 加拓展句:主题词 is a kind of emotional strength, which can
support us no matter how dark around us
becomes.(比如:爱心/自信/亲情/团结/坚持/诚信/友谊/乐观的态度/是一种情感的力量,无论我们周围有多么的黑暗,它都能支持我们。)
Additionally, our government's effective measures and policies are playing a
significant role in the realization of such a situation(.加拓展句:without 主题句,the
heart would break.上面的主题词都可以套进去,比如:没有爱心,心灵将会枯竭。) Just as an old Arab proverb has
it, there is a growing tendency for the public in the west to think the
significance of + 主题词.
          From what has been discussed above, the most important thing is not to say,
but instead to do. Chinese citizens are expected to enhance their awareness that
it is an indispensable part for the construction of harmonious society. Only in
this way, can we /our country/ the individual have a glorious future.)
          反面话题模板
          As is shown above, in the middle of the cartoon stands + 主题词,which
symbolizes + 主题词的另一种表达,+ 同位语即主题词第三种表达 + 表示主题词动作的非谓语动词. The drawer\\\\'s
intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be
thought-provoking. It is therefore safe to draw the conclusion that + 主题词 + is
not a blessing but a curse.
          Not only I, but also the best poets and philosophers also insist that the
problem has long plagued the people's social life. Obviously, I can think of no
better reasons for the question other than the following two. Initially, human
being’ s fearless curiosity about everything new has led some of them into this
marsh. Additionally, our education in the harmfulness of this issue has been far
from adequate to build the individuals ’sound resistance to this issue. Just as
an old Arab proverb has it, there is a growing tendency for the public in the
west to think the significance of + 主题词.
          From what has been discussed above, the most important thing is not to say,
but instead to do. Chinese citizens are expected to enhance their awareness that
it is an indispensable part for the construction of harmonious society. The
local and central authorities, not only chinese but also foreign ones, in
coordination, are obliged to do something useful, only through these action can
have a glorious future.
            
            
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          考研英语二写作模板:
          问题解决型
          As is shown in the picture(graphcartoon able),it goes without saying that
the drawing aims at revealing a common problem(in China):______.Its status as
the focus of public concern mainly results from its profound influence on
individuals, collective and even the whole world. Each of us should attach high
emphasis on solving it.
          As a matter of fact, the symbolic meaning the picture conveys is deep and
profound. Naturally and necessarily, there are two major ways coping with this
problem. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to authorities to take
measures. Once achieving the success of solving the problem, the whole society
also thrives/makes progress. Solving the problem can accelerate better
individuals’development. The other way that is worth adopting is to work out new
laws. Where there are better laws, there are more hopes, vitality and
development. These advisable laws eventually brings economic prosperity and
social harmony. Finally, I can safely come to the conclusion that it is high
time we enhanced the awareness of people that is every vital to us. Only by
these means can we succeed in solving the problem in the near future.(1
Therefore, measures should be taken to terminate the ridiculous affair. First
and foremost, governments should establish some regulations to prohibit
enterprises and people from making such misdeeds. What’s more, people should get
ready to pass criticism upon such misdeeds anytime and anywhere. After all, it
is necessary to develop our society by performing hard work instead of talking
nonsense.
          In my opinion, it is imperative that we should take some drastic actions.
On the one hand, we should appeal to our authorities to enact concrete laws to
control commercial fishing. On the other hand, we should enhance people\\\\'s
awareness that ocean resources are vital to us and the ecological balance will
be guaranteed with the strategy of sustainable development. Only by doing so can
we effectively protect our natural resources. Also I am convinced that we humans
can overcome this difficulty and we will have a bright future.)
          To conclude, we should not yield to mediocrity regardless of seemingly
insurmountable obstacles. So the prospect we are looking forward to will be
bright and encouraging.
          正面现象歌颂型1
          As is shown in the picture(graphcartoon able), it goes without saying that
the drawing aims at revealing a common problem(in China):______. It has
attracted extensive attention of the society. Nowadays, increasingly more
argumentations about it can be found in TV programs,newspapers,university
classes and many aspects of our everyday life.Its status as the focus of public
concern mainly results from its profound influence on individuals, collective
and even the whole world.
          First of all, ______________is crucial for every individual.With its
seemingly magic power, it can not only accelerate better
individuals’development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to
change the world. Those equipped with it are always admired and respected,
because it may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to
overcome difficulties and handle problems.Those people appear to possess a
special charm,bringing to others hope, passion and surprise,and,thus winning
others’favor and trust.It can directly promote the rapid progress of the
organization with its energy and indirectly spurs continuous development with
the good culture it generates.Through continuously promoting the social
productivity, unceasingly improving the productive relationship, and gradually
enriching human material and spiritual wealth, ______________eventually brings
economic prosperity and social harmony.
          In short, where there is better______________, there are more hopes,
vitality and development. When we are benefiting from it, we shall also do our
utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.
          正面现象歌颂型2
          As is vividly in the picture(s),it is a contemporary social issue in China
of common interests and permanent value. The picture(s)does reflect a
thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon nowadays.When weighing
in the mind,we find an apparent tendency underlying this sight:__________
          Simple as it is,what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.With
the development of economy and society, competition is becoming increasingly
fierce.It is impossible for anyone to finish a task without .Hence, people in
mounting numbers put great emphasis on .In fact, it has been universally
acknowledged that the ability of s the most essential qualification that anyone
who wants to achieve success should possess. Numerous examples can be given, but
this will suffice. A case in point is the successful host of Beijing 2008
Olympic Games and the deadly earthquake in Si Chuan province.These cases
effectively clarify that really counts in this competition society.
          Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the
sense of in our society. We should bear in mind that is of great significance to
both our society and ourselves. Everyone should have the ability of______. Only
in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become
more harmonious to live in.
          反面现象批评型
          How enlightening and compelling the above drawing is!It is so funny that
whoever sees it cannot help
thinking:_____.(这句自己加完整,从宏观上描述一下图画就可以,笼统的,大体的)______while_______.(这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点,必须找到矛盾点,用到while这个单词)Simple
as it looks,its intended meaning goes far deeper what on earth does the drawer
really aim to convey.
          第二段
          What the image above vividly mirrors goes far more than a simple
image,instead,it carries a thought provoking social phenomenon:____.(本文的主旨)There
are upsetting(如文章不是讽刺性的,就把upsetting删除)parallels today in our contemporary
community. For example,______.(举2个例子,如果字数够就举1个)
          第三段
          Much can be done. To begin with the schools and the mass media should
develop,guide and cultivate noble and worthy values and qualities among
people,doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this
worsening situation.(of this worsening
situation自己可以换成主旨的词,如果不换,这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的,就把worsening删除)What is more,the
authorities concerned should play a dominant role in taking nationwide actions
to curb(如文章不是讽刺性的,就把curb换成promote)such practices.In conclusion,all the society
should make actively more sustained and concerted efforts.Although we still have
a long way to go,a promising start has begun,and a happy,healthy and harmonious
society may be not be far behind.
          最后,怎么用模板才能得高分?
          答案是把万能模板变成自己的模板。
          但要想获得高分,就要总结出模板的思路和结构,在框架之上添加自己的内容,语言上进行优化的,使文章变得与众不同。只有文章中有自己的内容,才会吸引阅卷老师的眼球。
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