The growing conflict in service industries, especially the conflict between
patients and doctors, has aroused a heated discussion as to the solutions to
this phenomenon. Views on the topic vary greatly among people from different
walks of life.
There are several things we can do based on the causes for such conflict.
First, patients usually do not have a thorough understanding of how challenging
and frustrating a doctor's job could be; therefore, the government could create
more chances for people to have access to that kind of information. Also, it is
also suggested that regular experience sharing from experienced doctors and
constant communication with patients, particularly those suffering from severe
diseases, should be required of young inexperienced doctors so that they can put
themselves in the patients' shoes. Finally, balancing medical resources in
different areas will greatly relieve the pressure on doctors and hospitals
because they do not need to deal with so many patients at a time.
From my perspective, it is crucial that the relationship between doctors
and patients be improved remarkably and immediately. Only in this way can we
build a harmonious society.
低级版
Nowadays, there has been a heated discussion as to the relationship between
doctors and patients. Views on the topic vary greatly among people from
different walks of life. To best handle the relationship, some believe that the
patients’ needs should be satisfied as many as possible, but others consider it
better to put the doctors’ suggestions/opinions/advice first.
I totally agree with the idea that we should put the doctors’ advice first
to form a better relationship between the doctors and the patients for the
reasons presented below. To begin with, it is good/advantageous for the hospital
because if everyone in society can respect the doctors more, it is more likely
that the hospital will become better and better. (It is more likely that there
will be fewer conflicts between the doctors and the patients) Furthermore, it
benefits the patients, for it can help them form a better relationship with
doctors which could result in a more satisfied treatment for themselves.
From my perspective, it is crucial that the government should encourage
people to show more respect to the doctors. Besides, it is also significant for
people to be more confident about the doctors (who are more professional in
medicine/medical science). Only in this way can have a better society.
审题：其实题目中，最重要的一句话是：how to best handle the relationship between doctors and
patients,
所以大家要好好思考一下这一句话就好了;这句话体现出的主题是“医患关系”，体现的要求是需要一个“解决方法”，因为措辞用的是“how”，所以大家在写的时候，围绕“医患关系”，给出“解决方法”就不会偏题了;
发表于 2017-12-16 13:01:20
