初中英语优秀作文范例：Do you need my help? 你需要我帮忙吗？

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　　In China we always think it is good to help the old people, but it is not
always true in western countries.
        　　Everyone wishes to be young forever though it is impossible. If someday
there is somebody offering you help because he or she regards you as an old
person or thinks maybe you are not strong enough to do something, you may feel
unhappy. So be careful! Next time when you meet an old foreigner and want to
help him (or her), you should offer your help in a very polite way.
        　　At school, some of us also make the same mis-takes. When the teacher asks
others questions, we help them before they ask us for help. I think it is wrong
at least in two ways. First you take away the chance for others to practice; and
second you are showing that you are better than others though maybe you do not
mean it in that way. So you should learn how to be polite to others before you
act.
        　　Good. You have made great progress in developing a passage. I am glad to
see the sentence conherence in your last para. Better pay more attention to the
relationship between sentences. It's really wonderful to start your sentences
with adverbials.