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发表于 2017-6-1 16:05:12 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

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        每年造成死亡的事故中50%以上都与酒后驾车有关,酒后驾车的危害触目惊心,已经成为交通事故的第一大“杀手”。你对酒后驾车有着怎样的看法?
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                Currently, as a mass of reports on deaths andinjuries caused by drunken driving are all over thenews, the phenomenon of drunken driving hasaroused nationwide concern.
       
                Drunken driving will undoubtedly give rise tosevere consequences if we turn a blind eye to it. Inthe first place, it will put the safety of drivers,passengers and pedestrians under threat by causing traffic accidents, injuries or even deaths.After that, it means a mournful waste of time and money to treat the injured and fix thecrashed cars. In addition, the irresponsible behaviors of the drunken drivers may lead to theunstabilization of the society.
       
                Prompt and effective measures should be taken to reduce drunken driving before thingsget worse. On the one hand, it is essential that laws and regulations should be strictlyenforced to impose heavy penalty on those who violate the rules. On the other, more effortsshould be made to arouse public consciousness, such as propagating the bad influence ofdrunken driving. Only in this way can drunken driving be reduced.
       
                参考范文2
       
               
                        Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunk driving has become a grave problem in China in the past few years. Reports are often heard about deaths and injuries resulting from drunk driving. Actually, the phenomenon has been so widespread that it has caused nationwide concern.
               
                        A number of factors might have led to this problem, but the following are the critical ones. First, as a nation known for wine and drinking, Chinese have the custom of urging guests to drink more and regard it as a sign of hospitality. Some even encourage drivers to drink.
               
                        Secondly, the boom of Chinese economy in the past decades has brought along a sharp increase in the number of private cars in this country. However, many drivers are not fully aware of the danger of driving after drinking. Last but not least, laws and regulations regarding drunk driving were not severe enough in the past.
               
                        To our relief, we can see pertinent laws and regulations have been worked out and enforced to punish those who drive after drinking. However, I believe that more can be done to eliminate drunk driving. For one thing, severer laws can be made and putinto effect.
               
                        For another, the public should be educated about the harmfulness of drunk driving and the importance of traffic safety.
               
                        备考推荐:沪江网校8周年  助力“碾压”六级
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