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高考英语话题作文:给市长写封信

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发表于 2016-7-10 16:06:47 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  假如你是 Tom ,是某中学的在校学生,你给市长写封信,反映学校周围的环境问题。
          1. 学校周围存在一个市场,噪音、空气污染严重;
          2. 小商贩( peddler )经常出入学校,影响学生上课;
          3. 受市场影响,部分学生弃学从商;
          4. 要求搬迁市场。
          要求:
          1. 词数: 100 左右;
          2. 论点明确,论证合乎逻辑。
          [内容要点]
          1. 噪音空气污染严重:
          noise and air pollution are serious
          2. 商贩出入学校:
          peddler often go in and out of school
          3. 部分学生弃学从商:
          give up schooling and to be in-business
          4. 要求市场搬迁:
          ask the market to be moved
          [例题分析]
          本文要求考生陈述市场需要搬迁的理由,并进行论证,使之有理有据。本文对于培养学生观察、分析问题的能力及关心他人,关心社会具有积极的意义。
          [参考范文]
          Mr Mayor,
          We strongly ask the market near our school to be moved. It lies in three reasons.
          First, some noise and air pollution make us unable to fix our attention on study.
          Second, so many peddlers often go in and out of our school freely that we can't listen to our lessons clearly which is likely to be dangerous to us.
          At last, I'll say that some of the students begin to give up schooling and to be in-business, affected by the market.
          We are looking forward to your answer.
          Yours,
          Tom
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