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话题：
随着互联网的普及， 网络购物日益成为人们一种重要的购物形式，你对网络购物有何看法？
参考例文一：
Nowadays with the ever rapid development and increasing popularity of the information technology , shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.
Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example , shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries .On the other hand , lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What’ s more the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage.
In my opinion, shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.
参考例文二：
With the Internet playing an increasingly important role in our daily life,more and more people tend to shopping on line.On this phenomenon,different people hold different opinions.
Some people are in favor of online shopping because of it has a lot of advantages.First of all,shopping online is convenience,you can quickly choose the goods you need just by clicking the mouse rather than go outside.Besides, there's a large variety of consumer goods online, you have many options that will lead to a great fit for you.Finally,some goods to buy at a low price.It is cheaper than specialty shops.However,other do not prefer for the reasons listed below.To start with,due to the virtuality of the Internet and the lack of sellers’ credit,the quality of online goods is usually hard to be guaranteed.For this reason,many customer was deceived into the Internet.What’s worse,Internet transaction is not secure enough.For example,the password of some people’s bank accounts may be leaked out when they shop online.
From my point,shopping online makes life more convenient for us.The advantages outweigh the disadvantages.Although shopping online has flaws,they can be solved gradually with the development of our society and technology.
词汇：
development [dɪˈvɛləpmənt] n. 发展，扩展；发育；研制，开发；进展；
technology [tɛkˈnɒlədʒɪ] n. 技术，科技；技术应用
youngsters [ˈjʌŋstə] n. 年轻人
phenomenon [fɪˈnɒmɪnən] n. 现象；奇迹；非凡的人
disadvantage [ˌdɪsədˈvɑːntɪdʒ] n. 缺点；不利条件；损失 | 
发表于 2017-5-4 18:28:01