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话题：
Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Concentration
Concentration means the action of focusing one's energy and attention. What does concentration refer to? Why is it important? How does it change the outcome?
This week's topic: They focus on concentration... (90-110 words)
Suggestions:
1) losing concentration after working for a long time
2) work requiring high concentration
3) concentration of a substance
4) adjusting the concentration
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.
范例1：
There were people simply standing in line while staring at nothing in particular; once in a while, they would shift their weight from one leg to the other. Some people were talking to each other, and others were listening to music. There were quite a few who were busily typing on their phones or talking on their phones. For the people who were playing games on their devices, the concentration of their facial expressions was evident. Everyone seemed to mind their own business while patiently waiting for their turn to make the food purchase.
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发表于 2017-3-17 19:22:29