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中考英语作文写作范例:我的班主任

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  题目:请以“My Class Teacher”为题,写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。
  My Class Teacher
  我的班主任
  My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years.
  我的班主任是王老师,他是一个要求严格而亲切的老师。他已经教了我们两年语文。
  He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." I think he is a good class teacher.
  他总是告诉我们要好好学习,但不是时时刻刻学习。有时他会和我们一起玩。他说:“只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。” 我觉得他是个很好的班主任。
  点评:这篇文章取材的是身边熟悉的人,作者也有东西可写,更具有可读性。另外,写人时把主语稍作调整,读起来轻松多了。
  I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is [ename]Cherry[/ename]. Now I am studying in the middle school. I want to be an actress because I think it is a funny and exciting job...
  写人的常见句式如:
  This is my friend, Mary.
  She is... years old.
  She is a teacher/ an artist/ a singer...
  She/ He gets up at 6/5... / early/ late.
  She/ He has sports at school.
  She/ He likes...
  She/ He is strong/ fat/ slim/ kind/ thin/...
  She/ He looks like...
  She/ He is good at English/ maths/ Chinese/ physics...
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