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发表于 2016-7-10 15:25:18 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  Most advertisements make products much better than they really are.
          I strongly agree to the statement that most advertisements makes the
products presented much better than they really are, and points below supports
my idea.
          An essential reason concerns the nature of advertising – advertisers, in
most cases, would only make products seem better than they really are, not the
other way around. Since the ultimate aim of advertising is to persuade people
into buying something, and people would natually be attracted by something that
is desirable rather than repellent, advertisements are certainly made to display
a more attractive image of products. Therefore, customers would first be
graviated towards the virtual product that is somewhat dishonestly pictured by
advertisers, then desire to own it, and eventually purchase it. In this way, the
desire of consumers is satisfied, the purpose of production achieved, and the
advertising process completed.
          But the norm that a “good” product is advertised as a “better” one is often
challenged or even reversed – that is, unscrupulous businessmen make use of
advertising to sell inferior products, which raises a moral question. For
example, my mother was once attracted by a commercial of a encyclopedia which
was claimed to be the one and only complete version of several ancient Chinese
documents. She rushed to the shop and bought this “limited version” at a
eye-popping price, and regarded it as one of the most precious things in our
house. However, a few months later she found the same version was sold in bulk
at another shop at an unbelievably low price, which annoyed her for quite a long
time. We can learn from the experience that we should not always trust the
advertisements that are apparently exaggerating products, and keep alert in the
swarm of television commercials.
          However, the notion that “advertisement always make us disappointed”
sometimes results from consumers' unrealistic expectation of products.
Advertising easily makes people to imagine “perfect” products which are not
realistic at all, but consumers would rather keep this unreasonable hope. Then
they would be inevitably disappointed by the actual products which cannot be so
perfect, and attribute the cause to advertising. But it is actually the
unrealistic expectation that eclipses any product, because a perfect image is
absolutely subjective and could not even be realized. For example, I once signed
up for a group tour toLantaoIslandinHong Kong, being attracted by the beautiful
landscape pictures posted in the advertisements. But later on in the journey I
was disappointed because actual scenery was never as attractive as what I had
expected to see. Therefore, an unrealistic expectation is to be avoided in
making any buying decision.
          In conclusion, advertisements do make products seem much better than they
really are, as a result of commercial propaganda and our unrealistic hope
imposed on products. A better solution would be that both consumers and sellers
keep a more realistic point of view, and avoid unreasonable selling or buying
behavior.
          
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