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　　Many people like to live in the countryside because of many conditions.
However, if they live in the countryside, their children cannot get a good
education and job. The following essay will demonstrate why children should grow
up in a big city.
        　　If children grow up in a big city, they can get more opportunities to learn
about technologies such as computers (how to use it). Nowadays, technologies are
very important for everybody. If someone doesn’t know about technologies, he/she
cannot develop himself/herself. They will be left behind. Besides this, almost
everything in the world is modern. If children live in the countryside, they
cannot adapt themselves for the new world. It is so terrible.
        　　Furthermore, many schools or universities are located in a big city. So if
children live in a big city, they can choose which universities that they want
to enroll. On the other hand, if they live in the countryside, they haven’t more
choices.
        　　They can find a good job only in a big city such as New York. In a big
city, there are a lot of opportunities to find a good job. Besides this, they
can improve themselves in that they will meet other people who have a lot of
experiences. Moreover, most famous firms are located in big city. If they can
apply to these firms, it means they can earn a lot of money. It is a good way to
prove themselves. If they live in the countryside, they will be stuck in small
firms. They cannot make a lot of money. How about their family? If they can earn
a lot of money, they can buy everything that they want and the power and fame
will follow them. They can prove themselves in only a big city because there is
high competition there.
        　　In short, living in a big city has many advantage. Children can get more
chances to apply to a good university and firm. Don’t be hesitate to live in a
big city; then your life will be happy.