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发表于 2016-7-10 15:25:03 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other
people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you
prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
          ①总得来说应该hurry,尤其年轻人
          ②sometimes take time and slow down
          ③not mutually exclusive,相互促进
          The world is developing and changing at a dramatic pace nowadays. Even
though I enjoy life at a slower pace, generally it is unjustified that modern
people should always take their time and not try to keep up with this pace.
          No one wants to fall behind others. I believe people who say they do not
care about success and achievements are either trying to fool themselves or
giving up the hope. The development of society is generated by individual
improvement. Considering the pattern of nature, it is reasonable that people
should hasten themselves and get things done as quickly as possible. Being
quick, as long as not blindingly, can mean learning more and achieving more.
This is especially true for young people, who are eagerly preparing themselves a
better future. At school, top students are usually the ones who walk at a higher
pace and finish their assignment more quickly. Even for adults, in a business
world, efficiency is considered to be one of the most important factors for
success. Even though quickness is not equal to efficiency, under such extreme
competition, only by forcing themselves to hurry up and finish more tasks with
the same time can they prove their strength.
          It is true that people should try to be hurried and quick, yet occasional
relaxation is necessary for everyone. Every once in a while, people should put
aside their aim and work, take a slower pace and enjoy their time. Desire is
endless, and people are impossible to strive to fulfill every prospect. By
taking a slower pace, people can be granted the opportunity to taste the beauty
of life and nature. Only by slowing down can we have the moment to appreciate
the world around us and discover the essence of life. Furthermore, people who
are always in intense activity may not be capable of sustaining the pressure for
too long, which might lead to undesirable health problems.
          Therefore, being in a hurry and taking a slower pace in life are not
mutually exclusive; actually they can promote each other. Taking either way as
the only style of living can be dangerous and close-minded. This can be
demonstrated by our real live. Most of us would focus on intensive task and try
to finish them on time, while afterward, we might take a slower pace on less
important things, or even spend time on holidays to enjoy ourselves. During the
slower phase, we could get enough rest and become more energetic, thus we could
be able to concentrate again on the upcoming important issue.
          In summary, for a healthy and vibrant person, it is essential to recognize
their relative importance and call for a balance between hurrying and slowing.
In addition, we could try to utilize them both properly to make our daily life
more exciting and productive.·
          
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