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发表于 2016-7-10 15:25:03 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  In China, both of the parents have their jobs. With the development of
economy, people tend to pursue high quality living conditions. Most of the
parents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances, but
they seldom have time to stay with their children. In my point of view, no
matter how busy they are, they should make the best use of their time to stay
with their children.)
          First, the love between children and adults will be improved by spending
more time on their children. Children could feel parents' affection through the
genial conversation and sharing their pleasure with them. Every time when
parents take them to amusement park, help them to prepare their birthday
parties, applaud for them when they are competing in the sports meeting, the
time they spend with children will become treasure in their memories.
          Second, children need the direction from their parents. There are some
wrong behaviors in our society such as dishonesty, corruption, violence and
eroticism and so on. Children have weak resistance in defending this detrimental
influence. In this case, parents' instructions seem to be very important to
children's growth. Parents should sit down and talk with them about what they
should do and should not do. In addition, if parents often spend time in staying
with their children, adults' good behaviors will greatly influence their
children.
          Here I do not deny that there are some disadvantages in spending too much
time on children. Some parents restrict their children, and give them little
freedom to develop their interests. Therefore, I emphasize that parents should
educate and instruct their children appropriately in their spare time apart from
their busy works.
          
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