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托福写作高分范文:现在困难对以后的意义

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:24:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  你是否同意原来生活中的困难会成为以后生活重要的经验?
          Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in
our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the
future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer..
          [托福参看范文之一]
          Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult
at the time, can later become valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them
more. There are numerous reasons why I hold confidence on this opinion, and I
would explore only a few primary ones here.
          Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our
life, we are going to face numerous difficulties and obstacles, and each
difficulty will help us grow up, and become a valuable lesson for the future. A
toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows how to walk, and a
child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In
addition, only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We
will never appreciate anything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel
stronger and be more confident for the
          future obstacles.
          Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and
knowledge. Most of the times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster
through experiencing difficulties in our life and trying to find a solutions to
the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, no pain, no gain. For
example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in, the
first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and
difficulties.
          And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this
job better. The more difficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the
skills and knowledge to overcome it.
          Learning and this stage is extremely efficient and our problem-solving
skills well increase. After we overcome more and more problems, we can become an
experienced worker in this field and will be able to take on more challenges. We
will never fear that we will face the same kind of problem again. This means
that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.
          In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should
appreciate it and take it as a precious opportunity to gain knowledge and
experience about our study, work and life.
          [托福参看范文之二]
          Some people assume that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult
at the time will become valuable lessons for the future. I agree with it. In my
opinion, most difficult experiences we go through now will help develop our
personalities, such as persistence, independence and confidence, which are most
valuable for our future.
          Persistence is the first lesson most difficult experiences will teach us.
When I was a little girl, teachers and parents always taught me that if you want
to succeed in our future, then you must learn how to keep ourselves persisting
on our goals. From that time, I know no matter what kind of dreams I hold, I
must persist in realizing them. For me, entering a university is a very good
example. During my high school, I felt math was the most difficult subject for
me. I almost gave up my dreams because of my poor math scores. However my mom
asked me not to give up my plan and encourage me to keep going on. Finally I
succeeded in entering a prestigious university.
          After entering the university, I learned my second lesson - independence.
It was a really difficult time for me because I was never far away from my
parents for such a long time, what's more, I need to take care of myself not
only about living conditions but also about my study.
          At the first period I really didn't know how to adapt myself into the new
environment, it was no surprise that I got lost during that time. Luckily, I
have my parents and friends' encouragement to help me go through that quite
difficult time. Now I am working in Singapore and I think what makes me get used
to this fast society is due to my college's experiences. I believe that I will
become more independent than before.
          Building enough confidence is another lesson the difficult experiences
teaches me. Not everyone is born to be confident. What helps me build my
confidence is also through most failures I went through. There is an old saying
" failure is the mother of success". Yes, it is true! Through failures we can
learn what we are short of and gain a lot of lessons from others. Building
confidence is a gradual process. It takes time and you may see our improvement a
few years later. I think the chance of getting this job greatly relies on myself
to show much confidence that I can do this job well.
          There is no denying that three important personalities I learned from most
difficult experiences before make my life totally different now. In a short, we
need to go through many experiences no matter they are sweet or bitter. Although
most experiences are currently difficult or a bit tough for us, it is believed
that this kind of influence is powerful and definitely will be valuable for our
future.
          
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