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托福写作高分范文:希望朋友有什么性格

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:24:56 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  你最希望朋友具有幽默感还是聪明智慧?
          What do you want most in a friend - someone who is intelligent, or someone
who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these
characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to
explain your choice.
          [托福参看范文之一]
          I think what I want most in a friend is some one who is reliable. There is
two reasons: first, I think a reliable person can be trusted, then, I think
whenever I have trouble, I can rely on him, he will be sure to help me a
lot.
          First of all, as a friend of mine, he must be reliable, so that I can trust
him. I think friends are the ones who share secrets with me. I must make sure
that he is reliable, then I can tell my even the deepest secret in my heart, may
be the skeleton in the cupboard. Well, I’m just kidding, but I do think that
being reliable is the most important factor of a friend. Imagine that once you
told your secrets to your friend, and you found in the following day that
everybody in the school was
          talking about your secret----not a secret any more---how would you feel?
It’s such a horrible thing, isn’t it? Besides your huge anger, the only thing
you could do is to regret that you didn’t choose a reliable friend. Now you can
see how important choosing a reliable friend is.
          Secondly, a reliable friend is always ready to help you whenever you are in
trouble. There is an old saying that "a friend in need is a friend indeed" which
is very meaningful. That is what a reliable friend does. You can always rely on
him. We can say that a reliable friend is a true friend.
          One is lucky if he has even one reliable friend in his life. Not too many
words are needed for a reliable friend to help you, just one sentence "thank
you, my friend" is enough and you needn’t think hard in the pay back because
that is not necessary. That’s the reason why I see reliability as the most
important factor when I choose my friends.
          A reliable person can be trusted and relied on---that’s the two reasons why
I think reliability is what I want most in a friend.
          [托福参看范文之二]
          Friends are very important in everyone's life. But there are different
types of friends: some of them are very intelligent, some have a good sense of
humor and some are reliable. What I want most is the friend who has a good sense
of humor.
          Humor is a very important character of a person, because a person who is
humorous can always bring you happiness. I have a friend, who is not very
intelligent and reliable, but he is one of my best friends, just because he has
a good sense of humor. Whenever you call him, talk with him, he always tells you
some funny jokes that make you laughing. Even though you are in a very bad mood,
he can make you laugh and forget the sad things. A friend with a good sense of
humor is very optimistic; they can make your world full of light.
          If a person doesn't have a sense of humor at all, that's really bad. No
matter how intelligent he is, no matter how reliable he is, he will never bring
you happiness, although he can help you solve a few problems, his world is
without laughter. In my class there is a very smart guy, but because of his lack
of humor, we don't like to play with him, although it seems that he knows
everything.
          Friend plays a very significant role in everyone's life. But humor is the
most important character in a friend, because humorous friends make you happy
and see the world optimistically. They make your world full of hope, and full of
laughter.
          
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