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发表于 2016-7-10 15:24:51 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  是否同意一辈子住在同一个地方
          Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of
times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or
even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of
another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
          [托福参考范文之一]
          Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move many times
throughout their lives in order to looking for a better job, house, community,
or even climate. As far as I am concerned, the latter is more enjoyable than the
former. The reasons for this view go as follows:
          In the first place, some people have found a better job far away where they
live currently. In this kind of situation, do you move for the better career or
do you still live in the old place where you are already familiar with
everything nearby. Absolutly, I will choose moving not only because it gives me
a good career but also because moving is very exciting.
          In the second place, moving is very exciting. Fining a new house, buying
the new furniture, all of these are wonderful thing. For example, if I move, I
want find a single house instead of the town house, which I live now, because a
single house can possess more grass, which my son love very much. Moreover, I
want choose a big kitchen that all my family can sit a big dinner table and have
dinner togather.
          In the third place, living in a place in all my live looks like too boring
for me. Moving to different place, I can enjoy different community and different
climate. For example, I can enjoy the mild tempareture in the sourth America,
and also I do not miss the beautiful snow in the northern.
          From what I have discussed above, moving is exciting not only because it
gives me a new job opportinuture but also because it can let me enjoy the beach
of south and the snow in the north. Therefore, I prefer moving in search of
another place instead of staying in one place.
          [托福参考范文之二]
          Even though I have lived in the same house, in the same neighborhood, in
the same city my entire life, I know I would be happy living in a variety of
places. Moving would expose me to new people, new weather, and new housing.
          Even if I were to move to another part of my city, I would encounter new
people. Each neighborhood has a distinct personality. When I move to that
neighborhood, I would meet the shopkeepers and residents that shape that
personality. I may even adopt part of their manner as my own so I could be
recognized as part of that community.
          If I want to encounter different weather patterns, I would have to move
beyond my city. Where I live now, it is the same temperature all year. I would
like to go to a place where there are four seasons so I can experience really
cold temperatures. I would like to walk in the snow and perhaps go skiing. I
could learn winter sports if I lived in the north.
          Now, of course, I live with my parents in their home. It is a one story
house built around a courtyard where our family spends a lot of time. If I were
to move, I would like to live in an apartment on a very high floor so I could
see all around me. I could also meet my neighbors in the elevator and we could
get together for coffee in my apartment.
          The more I move the more I would experience change. I would meet new people
in everyplace I lived; I could move to sample countries with four seasons or
even a continent like Antarctica which only has two. Wherever I lived, I would
experience living in housing particular to that area. I would then be a citizen
of the world, wouldn't I? Could you call me a foreigner if I called everyplace
my home?
          
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