托福写作高分范文：电影电视对人际交流的影响

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　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has
destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and
examples to support your opinion.
        　　写作思路：
        　　电影和电视没有破坏朋友和家人的交流
        　　(1)电影和电视的很多内容正是朋友和家人聊天的重要内容。没有电影和电视，似
        　　乎聊天就缺了很多内容。
        　　(2)我们在很多时候是和朋友和家人一起欣赏电影和电视的，这促进了交流
        　　(3)电影和电视现在的设计很多是让家人朋友一起参与，这实际上也促进了交流
        　　参考范文：
        　　Some people believe that television has destroyed communication among
friends and family. I think this is an exaggeration. In my opinion, whether or
not television hurts communication depends on what type of program is being
viewed. More importantly, it depends on the type of viewer.
        　　There are empty programs and educational programs. Empty programs do not
challenge people. They have just enough storyline to keep them from switching
channels. There are also passive and active viewers. A passive viewer will just
watch television without thinking about what be or she seeing. The combination
of an empty program and a passive viewer makes communication unlikely. Passive
viewers just continue to watch, actually enjoying the fact that they don’t have
to think. They won’t break away to talk about programming with friends and
family. Even with better programming, passive viewers still won’t think or
communicate much. The probably even prefer the empty program because the better
programming is too much work.
        　　On the other hand, active viewers watching educational programming always
want to share what they see with friends and family. “Educational” doesn’t
necessarily mean documentaries on BBS. They could be dramas with realistic
relationships or action shows with clever plotlines. When active viewers watch
programs, they have ideas and talk about them with others. Good programming
inspires them to change their thinking and their lives. Unlike passive viewers,
they don’t want to watch more and more without thinking.
        　　Television may destroy communication among passive viewers. Those viewers
probably don’t want to communicate with friends and family much anyway. For
active viewers who already enjoy communicating, television is actually
helpful!