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雅思写作高分范文:政府是否应该控制传媒中的暴力

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:24:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  The government should control the amount of violence in films and
television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do
you agree or disagree with this issue?
          All too often people complain about the “evils” of much material available
in our mass media. Some other frequently criticisms come from our disquieting
society with the ever-increasing cases of violent crimes. Thus, it can make
great sense for our government to put a curb on the amount of violence in public
communications. (53 words)
          It goes without saying that we are risking our safety and society's values
by allowing this type of material to be openly exposed to the public. That is to
say, without control of what material is delivered to the masses, we can not
expect people to have a proper sense of right and wrong as they will constantly
see the horrific things that happen in the false reality of the media and become
immune to feelings of disgust toward such atrocious deeds in real life.
Controlling what is viewed on films and television is the responsibility of our
government in order to decrease violence in the real world. (108 words)
          Considering this problem faced by young people, who are among the most
vulnerable in our society, we can never deny the government's access. Indeed,
exposing our young children to extreme violence on television or films would be
detrimental to their development thus to the future of our society. (48
words)
          When these points are all taken into account, we can see the
straightforward necessity lies with our government's participation, which will
allow our children a better chance to develop in a healthy way and will provide
a precious sense of security for the citizens.
          
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