托福写作高分范文：有钱是否能代表成功？

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　　题目：
        　　only when people make a large sum of money can they be said successful. Do
you agree or disagree……
        　　正文：
        　　It is vital to define success although currently criteria are colorful. A
sound definition of the term helps people to live and learn better. Moreover, it
plays an important role in the construction of good social mores.
        　　It is wrong to say that people are not successful if they have failed to
make a huge sum of money. The reason is that whether one is successful is not
only measured with material yardstick but also against the spiritual criterion.
Spiritual achievements and contributions bear little relationship with money.
Put it in other word, many of those who have not earned sufficient money are
considered successful for their accomplishments. For instance, my mother has
never been able to make enough money but she is successful in that she has told
us why we live.
        　　To emphasize the spiritual elements in the understanding of what success is
is not to deny the importance of the ability to make money. On the contrary, the
capability to make a massive sum of money in many cases is a kind of success. In
terms of the individual development, any human being in a modern society where
money is the main economic dimension must be able to live independently by means
of earning and spending. In terms of the society development, a country must be
rich enough to protect basic human rights, provide foods, and offer education to
its members. Otherwise it is not successful.
        　　In conclusion, money is not the only standard of success, but it is
necessary to be able to make mone