托福写作高分范文：社会规则是否太严格?

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　　When it comes to various rules that young people have to follow, some
people claim that those rules are too stringent, therefore stifling
individuality. But others argue that rules are vital for the youngsters, and I
am one of them.
        　　In the family, young people must follow some rules made by parents. For
example, many children are required to go back home immediately after school.
Despite the strictness of the rule, it is not unnecessary considering the fact
that children may encounter various unexpected dangers wandering in the street.
Besides, I heard some of my friend complain that their parents ask them to save
money. This complaint is even more unreasonable because all too often young
people are impulsive buyers and family rules about saving money cannot be
ignored . Family rules do not end up here. Probably some of us are asked to
respect the old and cherish the young.This rule is also of vital importance for
a harmonious family.
        　　Schools and companies are also places where rules are miscellaneous . Take
my school rules as an example. The first rule, and probably the most
controversial rule, is that students must wear school uniforms. Some students
hate this rule, for they believe the rule stifles their individuality.
Nevertheless, there are good reasons for the rule: students in our school coming
from different family backgrounds, which means we have students who are well-off
and students who have to rely on school loans to finish schooling. Under this
circumstance, it is not unreasonable that students are forced to wear school
uniform. The abolition of the rule will lead to comparison among students, which
may cause declining test scores and degradation of morality.
        　　Last but not least, there are laws that young people have to obey for the
sake of their well-being . Laws about legal drinking age are advantageous to
young adults’ physical health. It is a common knowledge that drinking at an
early age is detrimental: it may cause mental incapacity and excessive reliance
on alcohol. Worse, some crimes are triggered by drinking excessively, for
drunken people always lack rational thinking and are easily irritated.
        　　From the above discussion I firmly believe that rules, no matter in family,
schools or society, are necessary and should be obeyed by young people. Only
rule-abiding citizens are capable of living a secure and prosperous life.