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托福写作高分范文:大学文凭与个人成就

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:24:23 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  Some people think that to have a successful life you have to have a
university education, while others think that it is not that important. Discuss
both views and give your own opinion based on personal experience and
knowledge.
          Example Essay: Education and Success
          Don't confuse a university degree with a successful life, even though
higher education can open doors to a range of economic options. It is one thing
to make a good living, and yet it is quite another to make a good fortune. In
various aspects of life, success is to be measured not so much by the education
that one has as by the effort that one makes, plus of course lots of luck.
          Undoubtedly, there are some types of success in professional life that are
dependent on a university education. You need a college degree to have a career
in a profession such as law, medicine, engineering, or teaching. In today's
workplace, job opportunities and academic degrees are linked in such a way that
it seems difficult, if not impossible, for an individual without good
qualifications to make any career success happen. According to national
statistics shown by economists, bachelor's degree holders earn upward of 40
percent more than high-school graduates. Based on this pattern, income levels
rise as educational levels rise. Many studies also reveal that university
education introduces you not only choices of career but also life goals and the
power to reach these goals. In short, being able to go through higher education
increases one's employability and earning potential as well as one's
self-esteem.
          Having a degree, however, does not mean that one will be successful in
life. In some work fields, what is crucial are hard work and being lucky. To
begin with, you do not have to have a higher education to become successful
people like business-persons, sports players, political leaders, movie and music
stars. While hard work is motivated by the desire to triumph, success by destiny
is associated with that old ABC--ability, breaks and courage. Not all success
stories are told about university graduates, nor are academic degrees
particularly essential when it comes to becoming wealthy. Ironic but true,
successful entrepreneurs even benefit from not having academic qualifications,
because going to college and taking examinations forces people to learn and
think like other millions of graduates. This actually makes it less likely that
they will come up with creative ideas and truly mould-breaking insights on which
amazing successes are built.
          There is no arguing the importance of a university education as long as
employability and income are concerned, but success also comes from effort to do
the right work at the right time. If you think a successful life means having a
lot of money, you are far from wrong. Nevertheless, it does not follow that the
door to success is closed for people who do not have academic results.
          
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