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托福写作高分范文:是否支持社区建高中学校

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:24:16 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  「题目」
          It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your
community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and
details in your answer.
          「范文」 A New High School in the Community
          Education is a top priority for every society, and the better the
educational facilities are, the more likely it is that students will succeed.
Their success will in turn be of benefit to the society as a whole. Because I
support investment in education, I would welcome a new high school in my
community. Furthermore, I believe a high school would benefit the community in
the following ways.
          First, the students who live in my community would no longer have to travel
very far to attend school. This would save them a great deal of time, which they
could then spend studying, relaxing, or helping their families. Second, with a
redistribution of students between the school they used to go to and the new
high school, both schools would be less crowded. This would enable students to
receive more personal attention and a higher quality of education. Third, a high
school can offer many advantages to the community as a whole. Residents may use
some of its facilities, such as the sports ground, or attend concerts and other
events in the auditorium.
          In conclusion, I believe that a new high school would benefit any
community. It would help not only the students and their families, but also
other residents of the neighborhood. Therefore, I would wholeheartedly support
the building of a new high school in my neighborhood.
          
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