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发表于 2016-7-10 15:24:01 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  Although it has more or less gained the support by some people that it is
good for more women to join the army, I am still prone to go along with the
opposite side, convinced that women are not suitable for military service, in
respect that well goes the old sayings "Experience is the father of wisdom and
memory the mother." Meanwhile everybody has his own hobbyhorse. It's to say
individual's attitude towards certain kind of issue may vary a great deal due to
the dependence of diversified attitudes on experiences of diversities. Hence, my
perspectives won't be fully demonstrated otherwise than by following facts of
reality.
          To embark on them, it comes as the first problem that women joining
military section, like barracks or other units will result in the increasing
possibility of ***ual violence. As well known to all, women have been kept away
from the war, as a consequence men were the only *** group in troops. Without
women insight, ***ual violence will be avoided because where there is no soil,
there are no fruits. Should women are allowed to enter the domain where used to
be dominated by men, *** desire will surely aroused some men who are in demand
of that to commit ***ual violence regardless of breaking the restricted military
constrains. Remember that all cats are fond of fish
          Besides ***ual violence, women's joining to army will certainly cause the
difficulty to arrange certain kind of facilities, in particular the washroom. It
could be easily to imagine what will turn up if men and women are showing
together without covering to each other. Therefore, to have their own washrooms
will be necessary and reasonable. It'll cost more to build two kinds of
facilities than single ones within the same number of population. Government
would rather invest more in weapon development than build more houses for women
troopers.
          Should it remains unable to unfold my perspectives, it'll come as
reinforcement that women's physical weakness make them unable to compete with
men. Battlefield is the place where the predators survive. Both experiment and
statistics indicated that dislike men, women can't fulfill missions with high
risk and tense due to their physical weakness. That's why it could be rarely to
deploy women in the frontier along with men. The difference in body structure
determines men were born to be matadors.
          A single flower doesn't make a spring. Though it is possible for me to name
the key facts but a few in great efforts, I can hardly release the flood of my
mind within a short essay on account of the limit of both length and time. I
wish I could be the forerunner putting forward some thinking while looking
forward to more creative ideas as long as they make sense.
          
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