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雅思写作指导:范文汇总-长期供职与频换工作的优缺点

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:23:33 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  Some people prefer to stay in the same job for the same company, but others
prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons to compare the
advantages and disadvantages of both sides.
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          Introduction( 20 words)
          Nowadays very few people intend to go in for a life-time career. Still
there are some advantages to doing so.
          Body1( 99 words)
          Merits of always taking a position can be examined by three aspects.(topic
sentences) First, if you stick at taking a post, all angles of the job will have
appeared; after some time,you will definitely have a good command of it.
Consequently you may become a veteran of the field and earn respect or prestige
from others. Second, you can establish an extensive social connections relating
to the field, helping you tear down most of the barriers standing in the way of
your working endeavor. Finally, mistakes of the routine tasks would be minimized
because you have learned the lessons.
          Body2 (111 words)
          On the other hand, I would like to illustrate the advantages of
experiencing different jobs. (topic sentence) Initially, we look at the issue of
bribery. Many high-level staff are inclined to accept bribes via power in hand.
However, if he knows that someone else will soon take his place, such acts can
be avoided. We then look at work motivation. If one works for the same company
for a long time without promotion, he may get sick and tired of doing the same
daily routine. Nonetheless, a manager should have qualities of a sense of
teamwork and the capability of coordination. Therefore, to try various positions
can help you gain ground to be promoted.
          Conclusion ( 67 words)
          In summary, staying in the same post can cultivate one to cut out for the
job but involve one in a boring career while changing jobs frequently can be
both advantageous by keeping bribery away and providing one with more
opportunities of promotion and disadvantageous by making mistakes occasionally.
In my opinion, people should seek a decent and good-paid job and pay little
attention to changing it.
          编辑提醒:雅思范文仅为大家提供一个写作思路,以及一些可参考的论点论据,文章仅供参考,切记不可原文背诵,否则可能导致极低的分数!
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