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Essay by 谢振礼老师 Jeenn Lee Hsieh
TWE Topic>
《托福真题》
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care
of their family members in big cities better than in the countryside. Use
specific reasons and details to support your answer.
《实验范文》
Hardly can you take care of your family members the way you like unless all
of you live 'happily' together, wherever you might be. Money being the most
important motivational factor that people work, chances are that you need to
live in a big city where your workplace is. In addition, there are at least two
good reasons--medicare and schooling--that you are able to take care of your
loved ones better in a city than in the countryside.
A big city is a place where people's urgent medical needs could be sooner
answered. This is more than you can expect in the rural environment. Despite
obvious advantages like clean air and friendly neighbors, living in the
countryside means being far away from almost everything, for example, good
hospitals--not to mention good foods and a variety of entertainment . Indeed,
there are times when a family member might become seriously ill, and in this
case you certainly would not wait for the next week and see what could happen.
For that matter, it makes sense living in a city so as to ensure that the old
and the young in the family should be under proper medical protection in time.
After all, you wish to take better care of your family members, don't you?
Sending children to a good school is an act of caring for them. There is no
denying that children often do not receive the same quality of education in
villages as they do in cities. Although it is true that in big cities
competition is much more keen among peers, actually this is exactly what is
right about how to educate youngsters. It is also true that school fees are
generally higher in a city than those in the countryside, but money is exactly
what motivates you to work hard in the first place. Thus, if you are not
especially concerned about educating your children in the best possible way, it
means that you are not doing enough in parenting. Fortunately, living in a big
city you do not have to worry so much because there are plenty of opportunities
for school children.
All things considered, nothing can be compared to the benefits that a big
city has to offer for your family members, if only referring to health care and
quality education. Now that you live and work in a big city, you simply do not
want to leave your family members behind in the countryside. Because you want
your family members to be happy, you may just as well think that happiness is
having a caring, close-knit family in the city. (Essay created by Jeenn Lee
Hsieh)
Most probably you need to work in a city rather than in the countryside,
and you want to have your family together under your care. No doubt, money is
the most important motivational factor that you work where the job is.
The living expenses in urban areas exceed those in rural areas, and A city
is a place where you do not have to wait for an answer to medical needs while
people in the countryside people members of your family are ill,happiness is
having a caring, close-knit family in a city.
A city is a place where you do not have to wait for next week for an answer
to the family needs, to taste the food of another country,it goes without saying
that the li8ving standards in urban areas exceed the ones in rural areas. the
inhabitants in big cities have many choices to select, ranging from schools to
hospitals to transport to restuarants to entertainments. By contrast, people in
the countryside are deprived of everything from medical stations to entertaining
places being away from everything. |
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发表于 2016-7-10 15:23:18