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2011年在巴塞隆拿最后一次的雅思测验A类大作文真题是由一位西班牙网友的考后回忆。谢振礼老师回应原创范文一篇，同时提供给中国考区的学友分享和批评。
【甲】对策：
立场--因特网肆虐，报纸不会有前途
支持--网页上的新闻又多又快，又免费.
抽象--报纸行业已近日落，极可能永不复起。
【乙】圆形逻辑，四段定位，18句装配。
隐形模板的应用仅供参考。谢振礼老师不炒冷饭。
Even though people read the news using the internet nowadays, newspapers
still are an important source of information for the general public. Do you
agree or disagree with that statement? ( IELTS test in Spain，2011)
【起】开头
This age is one in which the popularity of the Internet is ruining
everything in the information industries, particularly newspapers. It is likely
that before very long newspapers will never again be considered seriously as an
important source of stories for the general public. What can you say about a
modern invention that is providing you with more news more quickly for free?
【承】接头
Newspaper readership is getting smaller and smaller because the current
generations choose their news online at no cost. This is an indicator that print
circulations are in for further decline, probably to an inevitable fall
world-wide. It used to be that newspapers industry was one of the most
profitable businesses, selling a great number of copies and charging handsome
fees for any sort of advertising, big and small. Once upon a time, news
customers were expecting newspapers to arrive at the door-step first thing in
the morning. It was then, and this is now when news is available 24/7 at a
click. Indeed, with the possible exception of free TV broadcasts rivaling on the
screen, Web pages have far and widely outdone printed pages in news supply.
【转】转头
What is more, since the up-to-minute Web pages have a great deal more
information to deliver to the public, doubtlessly readers are abandoning
newspapers for internet media. Therefore, people who still think that newspapers
will continue to be an important source of information must think again. It
cannot fail to be realized that the rise of the Internet is an unmistakable sign
of the beginning of the end of all newspaper kingdoms. Nowadays young
non-newspaper readers are heavy online news consumers, while printed papers are
too late in coming to satisfy their news curiosities. Predicting the destiny of
newspapers is not unlike watching the sun reluctantly setting under the horizon,
almost surely never to rise again. In short, newspapers are going out of
business.
【合】回头
The Internet is also destroying other information industries ranging from
magazines to books to movies to music, but none has suffered as much as
newspapers, alarmingly cutting circulations and decreasing incomes. Now that
people can have the pleasure of getting informed from minute to minute via the
Internet, the future of newspapers is shrouded in shadows. Of course, that the
Internet is for the better or for the worse in changing the way people read news
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发表于 2016-7-10 15:20:51