看老外董小龙写雅思范文:旅游活动好与坏

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　　The costs of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activities in
different countries?
        　　随着国际旅行的费用降低，观光事业应运而升。日益成长的旅游活动在不同的国家造成何种利益?何种坏处?
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        　　Tourism is often touted as an industry that will never shrink in size. In
other words, as the world develops, more and more people will be able to travel.
Although many may see this as a positive phenomenon, it is not a trend without
drawbacks. Both the advantages and disadvantages of this topic will be analyzed
before a reasoned conclusion is reached.
        　　On the one hand, the reduction in travel fare and the increasing of global
tourism can be seen as a positive event as it promotes intercultural
understanding and global harmony. For example, many Middle Eastern states have
opened their doors and embraced tourism over the last twenty years and this has
helped shed prejudiced views internationally that all Middle Eastern countries
are dangerous. This development clearly shows the benefits of an increasing
international tourism industry.
        　　In addition to this, tourism creates new opportunities for trade. For
example, many Chinese tourists are bringing back products from foreign countries
that are currently unavailable in China. These new trade ties are great for the
health of the entire global economy and can be seen as yet another positive
ramification resulting from increased tourism.
        　　On the other hand, the international tourism industry does pose some
disadvantages. For one, money travelling into countries through tourism can lead
to the establishment of some morally questionable activity. To name a few,
tourist hotspots in developing countries are often rife with theft problems,
maimed beggars and prostitution. The inflaming of these issues as a result of
increased tourism is an obvious disadvantage to the growing global travel
industry.
        　　Following this analysis of the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and
the falling travel prices that are making it more possible, it is felt tourism
has more benefits than drawbacks. It is hoped the growth in global intercultural
understanding continues uninterrupted as tourism increases.
        　　后记：来自加拿大的董小龙老师是国际知名的雅思写作培训专家。雅思中国网取得同意发布与评论。谢振礼老师增加注解。原文照抄。
        　　This model answer was written by Mr. Ryan Higgins, an online IELTS
instructor, blogger and author.