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发表于 2016-7-10 15:20:36 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  Friday is
coming,乐加(happy+)的雅思儿们,就先忍忍,揉揉眼睛继续来看。注意今天的写法不同,是选择了一个观点来论证的,而之前都是辩证地来写。如果语句不是很丰富,不主张这样的写法。Just
relax and have a look at it.
          Topic: Some people believe that children from poor backgrounds can be
better prepared for the adult life than those from rich families. Do you
agree?
          The state of poverty is reputed to possibly have a profound impact upon
activating the wealth of potential from the minds of today's youth. As far as I
am concerned, I agree to the opinion that children form poor backgrounds can be
better prepared for adult life than those from the rich. In this essay, I would
discuss my ideas.简单明了地说出自己的点,家境不好的孩子能够更适应成人的生活。
          The gauge of the richness of a family is probably how much the family earns
for a living. It is of great significance to note that the mental and physical
development of children is not only affected by the wealth of their family, but
also other related factors such as the living conditions and the surroundings.
Nevertheless, the impact that how much money a child's family has in store is
quite remarkable. In my opinion, I am positively supportive of the assumption
that poverty takes good care of what a child needs for their adult
life.尽管家里的经济条件对孩子的影响显著,但是生长环境的影响也不可轻视。提出支持穷人的孩子早当家这个事实。
          For the rich children, the inherent and inevitable search for an easy and
even lavish lifestyle is encouraged and fuelled by the wealth aplenty that is
non-existent in the poor family. In contrast, the poverty-stricken children are
compelled to accustom themselves to the hardship they are facing with, which
makes them feel obliged to assume responsibility for helping the seniors by
participating in the daily chores, such as plowing on a field, grooming horses
in a stable, ect.对比家境好和家境差的孩子不同的思想,指出家境差的孩子要承担的责任更多更大。
          The rich families dwelling in urban and suburban areas are notorious for
fostering slovenliness and lavishness of the next generation, while the children
from poor families who originate from the bedraggled sections of the
countryside, derogatorily termed as 'rustic bumpkins' or 'yokels', are said to
benefit from their poverty which manifests in their natural cultivation of
certain characteristics such as diligence, the capability of bearing hardship
and so on.家境差的孩子在恶劣的条件下,更加立,勤奋,抗挫能力强;家境好的孩子容易自私,只知索取,不知回报。
          In summation, I insist on the idea that children from poor families are
better prepared for the adult life than their rich peers.重申观点
          Vocabulary aquisition:
          Keep your face always toward the sunshine,and shadows will fall behind
you.--Walt Whitman 永远面朝阳光吧,阴影就会被甩到后面。Happy+ ieltsers, come on. 加油!
          gauge 规格,相当于第三天里的criteria,一种标准;测量
          We must gauge the diameter of wire first.我们必须先测量电线的直径。
          The defence ministry is trying to gauge the extent of the
leak.目前,韩国国防部正设法评估这次泄密的程度。
          surrounding 人生长的环境,相当于environment,要会用
          in store 贮藏着;准备着;将要发生
          There are plenty of energy sources in store on earth.地球上贮藏着很多能源。
          assumption 假定,设想,相当于view, opinion, 学会在一篇文章里换着用就行
          inherent 固有的;内在的;与生俱来的,遗传的
          A love of music is inherent in human nature. 爱好音乐是人的天性。
          lavish adj. 浪费的;丰富的;大方的 vt. 浪费;慷慨给予;滥用
          Socialize with friends, but don't overspend on lavish
entertainment.与朋友进行交往,但不要因奢侈款待而超支。
          compelled to 被迫
          He felt compelled to translate some of Nixon's musings into
action.尼克松的有些想法他认为非得付诸行动不可。
          accustom oneself to 使自己适应
          To move to live in another country is easy, it's by no means to accustom
oneself to the new culture and the new way of life of the
country.要想移居并生活在另一个国家并不难,但要使自己适应移居国的文化以及改过人的生活方式可就不是一件轻而易举的事情了。
          feel obliged to 认为有义务
          In such cases, some doctors feel obliged to hasten
death.在这样的案例当中,有些医生认为有义务加速死亡。
          assume responsibility=shoulder responsibility 承担责任(雅思考试必备短语,记)
          Assume responsibility for the department when the manager is absent or as
needed.
          经理不在时或有需要时负责部门工作。
          dwell 居住
          They dwell at unity with the natives.他们与当地人和睦地住在一起。
          foster vt. 培养;养育,抚育;抱(希望等)adj. 收养的,养育的 (这个词也常用,记)
          Certain industries, such as the movies or banking, foster a particular
culture.
          某些行业企业文化独特,例如电影业或银行业。
          slovenliness n. 邋遢;马虎;懒散
          derogatory 贬损的
          He had drawn a derogatory statement from George.他已经逗出乔治一句毁贬的话。
          rustic bumpkins=yokels 乡巴佬,土包子
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