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发表于 2016-7-10 15:20:32 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  昨晚和一个这周六就要参加雅思考试的好友聊天,这是他第三次考了,以前他第一次考的时候是我的第三次,我们聊了很多有关作文的东西,我说你不要花很长时间去背单独的一篇范文,而是应该挑选类似话题的一起看,然后摘抄自己觉得好的和用起来得心应手的句子。还有就是考试的时候要有这样的感觉,当阅读题的答题卡收上去,作文答题卡发下来的时候,如果你有强烈的欲望想写自己准备很久的作文,想要证明自己的努力成果时候终于到了,那么你一定会发挥得很好!推荐一首五月天一首《OAOA》(现在就是永远)。旋律激昂,歌词也不错,郁闷的时候不妨听听。如:人生都太短暂,别想,别怕,别后退,现在就是永远。加油,不论你是出于什么目的去考雅思,都要做个自己的英雄,不到最后一刻不放弃。
          今天的话题Topic: Some believe that a country should help its local citizens,
while others believe that help should be given to the most needed. Discuss both
views and give your own opinion. 拿到题目,能看懂题意吗?
          Some believe that a country should help its local citizens, while others
believe that help should be given to the most needed. Discuss both views and
give your own opinion.
          As a controverial issue, nowadays, whether the help given by a country
should help its local citizens or to the most needed place is being debated
highly. Ideas vary from people, some claim that the country should help its own
people. In this essay, I will explore both viewpoints and at the same time, give
my own point of view.
          Those who believe that a country should help its local citizens claim that
one country's leading duty is protect and prosper its people, helping other
countries' people is peripheral. Country takes the responsibility to create
better condition/public transportation system, and to develop safer economic
atmosphere for its citizens. Moreover, even if its people have lived a
relatively high standard life, money still needed be used to buils distinguished
medical system and high-quality education program, etc. After all, all the
government fund comes from taxpayers, it also should be used in improving local
citizens life quality.
          Conversely, loads of people believe help should be offered to the most
needed, since their living situation are undoubtedly worse than an
overwhelmingly majority of people on the face of the water. To make things
worse, natural disasters might frequently happen in these areas, like
hurricanes/earthquake/droughts and so on. If help were not provided by other
countries, some could never survive.
          Personally, both viewpoints have their pros and cons, I could not give my
vote to either of it. I agree that the initial duty for a country is to provide
a cleaner/safer and more harmonious circumstance for its people. However,
helping local people does not in contradiction with helping those who need help
in other countries. When they stuck into trouble, I believe a country of
morality would offer its help with no hesitation.
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