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雅思写作辅导:范文118篇(含小作文)part 1

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:19:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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          some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the
advantages,do you agree or disagree?
          范文1:
          the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our life.in the past,we
travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,cars can do it .its goes
withour saying that the invention of cars bring great benefit to all of us.but
as proverb goes:no garden without weeds.car is not exception.
          owing a car has a lot of advantages.for one thing,car provide us the most
convient way of transportation.we can get around freely without spenting a lot
of time.emotionally,i always found driving is so exciting.for another,its the
comfortable to drive a car.In winter.drivers always can stay warm and dry even
in rainy whether,in addition,drivers are usually safe in their cars when they
are out at night.
          Cars bring the human merits,their side-effects graudually come to the
surface.firstly,to run a car need a lot of oil,which is getting less and
less.the increasing number of cars contribute the lacking of energy.secondlly,as
more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting
heaver and heavier,which lead to the serious social problem--traffic jam.in
addition,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of
carbon monoxide into atmosphere.it make the air of cities unbreathabe,it strip
people contact with frensh air.
          therefore,the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our
envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law should be issued to
keep the numbers of cars under control.thus,our heavier traffic can be
solluted!
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