雅思写作高分范文：frequency repetition

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　　2008年12月6日雅思写作真题范文及解析
        　　分析：
        　　题目分析：题目很体贴!并配有解释!
        　　题目其实就是有关“死记硬背”学习形式的讨论，只是许多同学被“by frequency repetition”给忽悠了，但如果你稍微注意一下紧跟其后括号里的解释(rote learning),这个rote就是我们常说的“死记硬背”啊，在口语考试中，考官常说的：Don't rote everything, otherwise your score will be penalized(不要去死记硬背你的口语答案，否则你的分数会被处罚的)。很多同学翻译成“重复记忆”可以理解，但问题是此题配有解释啊!不认识rote这个单词是根源，证明你的词汇量太低，而且对教育类的单词不熟悉。如craming ：填鸭式教学。
        　　写作思路：客观评价这种典型的学习方式，有用，但太机械化。还是应该积极性思考和学习，及我们常说的think creatively and critically. 这句话是不是很眼熟啊。
        　　安慰的话：说实话，大家不用太绝望，重复记忆不就是死记硬背吗，重复=死记，因为没有主动性的思考，所以这篇文章这样写的话，你不会偏的far away。再说，考官一看中国学生对rote的理解就都是这样的话，法不责众嘛。放心，不会有问题的!我自己想了下，如果按repetition这样写出来的话，跟rote差不多。主要看你的第二个观点，及how to learn effectively and efficiently.
        　　范文展示：
        　　题目：
        　　Memorization of information by frequency repetition(rote learning) plays a role in education system to what extend do you agree or disagree.
        　　范文：
        　　Learning is a complex process that involves different strategies and stages. As a key approach of learning, memorization of information by repetition contributesto the overall effectiveness of an education system. But we should also admit that rote learning has a number of limitations.
        　　Learning by repetition is an effective strategy in learning. For example, Chinese people believe that one will get the gist of a book after reading it for a hundred times. Researchers have found that rote learning is particularlyuseful for young learners. When teaching children how to use a computer, instructors show them over and over again until they can perform tasks correctly. Moreover, for certain kinds of learning at early stage, the understanding involved is often minimal. Naturally rote learning assumes an important role.
        　　However, we need to bear in mind that meaningful learning is more essential for our education system. When students grow older and enter higher grades, the scope and depth of their learning grow. Surely rote learning can help students learn knowledge by heart but it could do little to improve their analyzingability and creativity. There has been strong criticism that some schools overemphasize the importance of memorization of knowledge and produce students with great weaknesses in applying knowledge in practice. Solution for such problem could be that schools and students put in more effort into meaningful learning.
            
            

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        　　To conclude, learning is a complex progress and students employ different strategiesat various stages. Rote learning is important in education system, but meaningful learning is more critical for students in obtaining advanced ability and skills.