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　　Many think punishment is necessary to help children learn the distinction. What extents do u agrees or dis?
        　　(It is important to tell the children what is right or wrong at their earlier age. Punishment is good to tell the distinction between right and wrong. Do what extent u agrees or dis? )
        　　许多人认为惩罚可以帮助孩子认识对错，多大程度上你同意还是不同意?
        　　Nowadays the quality of education is very low, some people think that should encourage our student to evaluate and criticize their teacher, other believe that this would result in loss of respect and discipline in the classroom , Discuss
        　　许多人认为不断的提高教育就应该鼓励孩子去评价和批评老师，另一些人认为这样就将导致教室的尊严和纪律的消失。
        　　Some people think children should learn to compete, but others think that children should be taught to cooperate. Express some reasons of both views and give your own opinion.
        　　在学校体育活动时老师是否应该要学生学会竞争，还是应该让他们学会合作。
        　　Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree.
        　　男女分校的利弊
        　　Some people think that we should teach different children together, and others think the intelligent children should be taught separately. Discuss and give your own opinion.
        　　有人认为应把不同的孩子放在一起教育!有的认为应该把聪明的孩子分开教育，你怎么看?
        　　Some people think that school select their pupils according to their academic ability, other think that young people according different abilities together. Your opinion?
        　　有人说学校应该根据学生的学术成绩选择他们，有人认为把不同能力的学生放在一起教育，你怎么看?
        　　Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behavior and to protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
        　　家长和老师用很多规矩去鼓励孩子好的行为和保护他们远离危险，可是孩子将收益与少的规矩和更大的自由，
        　　把休闲放松的方式引入对孩子的教学中，你是否同意。
        　　Nowadays ,some people think the city is no longer a good place for children’s education ,they suggest that the country is a better choice .to what extent do you agree or dis?
        　　如今人们认为城市不在适合孩子成长，他们认为农村更合适小孩，多大程度你同意?
        　　The computers are widely used in education, and some people think teacher are not play important role in the classroom. To what extent do u agree or dis?
        　　电脑已经广泛引用，所以老师已经不在那么重要
        　　In the modern world, the school is becoming unnecessary for children to study, they can use Internet which has a widely information available for children so that they can study at home instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
            
            

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        　　1. You are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus. One day you find something wrong with your accommodation. So you write a letter to the House Officer to tell them what happened, the reason you think, what you decide to do, and whether if it is right.
        　　2. It is wrong that our government pay more money to the artist projects, for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures appearing at the public places, because there are more important thing to do. What‘s you opinion? Do you agree or disagree with it?
        　　3. writing to an English speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.
        　　4. Participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical condition and social development.
        　　5. You have left college. But you didn‘t say goodbye to your friend who live in the room with you because he had a course at that time. Write a letter to him to appology and tell hem how you spend that days before you leave and how you get home. Then invite him to visit you.
        　　6. Some people say the parents should except school to conduct their children‘s behavior and tell them what is ‘right‘ or ‘wrong‘. Others say schools should take this responsibility. Please give your point about it.
        　　7. Write to the agency officer and complain about the rent car which has sth wrong. Tell them the problems of the car you rent from the agency and your requiring.
        　　8. As the developing countries and the third world countries, there are a funds, how to use it? Invest in the basic education or in the high-technology, for instance, computer? What‘s your opinion?
        　　9. You are a foreign student. Write to the Student Union, introduce your hobbies and interests and ask information of clubs and societies. You want to join a club or society enjoy your time when you study there.
        　　10. Fast food is developing more and more popular. It replaces other traditional food. Some people think it is good, some people disagree with it. What‘s your opinion about it. Give some reason of your opinion.
        　　11. A friend will visit Beijing. You will meet him at airport. But for some reason, you have to be late. Explain the reason. Since you haven‘t meet each other, tell the friend where you will meet and how to recognize each other.
        　　12. More and more children‘s writing & math ability are affected by computers and calculators. We should limit the use of those tools. Disagree or agree.
        　　13. you have broke your leg and have to stayed in hospital. you received many cards and letters from your classmates. write a letter to tell them your detail of your position and thank them at the same time.
        　　14. some people say that it is impossible for women to be an effective women and to be a good mother in home at the same time. they also suggest that the government should give the salary to mothers who stay at home to take care of their children.
            
            

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        　　Task 1 :
        　　You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
        　　The tables below are the results of research, which examined the average percentage marks scored by boys and girls of different ages in several school subjects. Write report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
        　　You should write a minimum of 150 words.
        　　Boys：
        　　Subject Age Maths Science Geography Languages Sports
        　　7 63% 70% 63% 62% 71%
        　　10 65% 72% 68% 60% 74%
        　　13 69% 74% 70% 60% 75%
        　　15 67% 73% 64% 58% 78%
        　　Girls:
        　　Subject Age Maths Science Geography Languages Sports
        　　7 64% 69% 62% 62% 65%
        　　10 65% 73% 64% 67% 64%
        　　13 64% 70% 62% 65% 62%
        　　15 68% 72% 64% 75% 60%
        　　作者建议:
        　　This IELTS task 1 example is quite difficult because it presents the student with a lot of data, and because the significant trends in the data are not overly obvious. Let's have a look at how we might go about organising the information in the tables into a task 1 answer.1. First, we need to be aware of all of the variables that make up the data: the scores (percentage averages), the school subjects, the age groups and the gender or sex.
        　　2. Now we need to sort the information into some sort of sense:a.) The first thing to do with any table is to find the highest and lowest numbers. Looking at these tables we can see that boys tended to score highly in sport and lowly in languages, and that girls on the other hand tended to score highly in languages and lowly in sport. This is the first and most obvious significant feature of the tables - the boys' strong subject is the girls' weak subject and vice versa.b.) But a comparison of subject scores between the two sexes reveals only limited significance. We can see that for most of the subjects the boys and girls got similar scores. Boys scored slightly higher in geography, but by the age of 15 the scores were the same. So, all that we can say about the charts in terms of the differences between boys and girls by subject is that, besides sport and languages, they were negligible (not important).c.) The next logical step then, is to look closely at the scores for the different age groups. When we do this we find that some interesting patterns emerge. For all of the subjects, except the weak subject for each sex (languages and sports), the scores, between the ages of 7 and 15, increased overall, for both sexes. But if we look at the scores for the years between these two we see that the improvement was not constant, and that at a particular age the scores for most subjects fell. Also, the age at which this occurred was not the same for boys and girls. This pattern seems to reveal that both boys and girls went through a slump in academic performance, but at different times, which is certainly an interesting feature of the data in the tables, and definitely needs to be mentioned. The largest difference between scores for two different age groups ( Languages - 10%; 65-75% 13-15yrs) should also be noticed.
            
            

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        　　Task 1 :
        　　You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(shown at the picture)
        　　Topic: Compare the types of communication used in 1962 and in 1982.
        　　You should write a minimum of 150 words.
        　　P-phone C-computer L-letter
        　　写作段落大意:
        　　Short / Simple Introduction.
        　　Paragraph talking about one behaviour Pattern.
        　　Paragraph talking about contradictory behaviour Pattern.
        　　Concluding Remark.
        　　Model Answers:
        　　1、General Overview /Introduction.
        　　The two pie charts compare different methods of communication used in 1962 and 1982. We can see that for the three mediums surveyed, there are significant changes for each.
        　　2、Paragraph dealing with information which decreases.
        　　In 1962, letter writing was the most popular form of communication, accounting for 50% of the total. However, by 1982, this figure fell to just 10%, the smallest of that years figures. In this paragraph, we make it clear, which time period we are writing about. Don't repeat "the year" again and again.
        　　3、Paragraph dealing with information which increases.
        　　By contrast, we can see that the use of the phone and computers during this same period have both risen dramatically. The telephone, at 60% becomes the most used form of communication, rising from 35%. Similarily, the use of computers, doubles to 30%. (No need to use 15%. We can understand OK using this type of phrase.)Overall, we can see some important changes in the forms of communication employed during the two decades surveyed.
            
            

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        　　Task 2 :
        　　Topic: Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain % of these jobs to be reserved for women?
        　　You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. You should write a minimum of 250 words. You should use your own ideas﹐knowledge and experience to support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
        　　A: 写作段落大意:
        　　1、Introduction - short statement of opinion.
        　　2、Body paragraph (1)(2) Different reasons to support opinion. (3) Statement of opposite point of view "balances" essay.
        　　3、Conclusion - summarizes Body.
        　　B: Model Answers:
        　　1、Introduction / opinion
        　　Most of the jobs in society that are high-paying，powerful，and demand a lot of responsibility are held by men. I do not believe this situation arose because women are incapable of doing high-level work. I believe society could benefit if more women were in postions of power and therefore I think the government should reserve a percentage of these jobs for females.
        　　2、Why should government encourage a certain % of high level jobs for women?
        　　(first reason)Firstly, the problem of unfair employment distribution appears to come from social convention and not competence or true ability. At a young age most girls are not encouraged to pursue political office, business success, or professional prestige . On the other hand, boys are told to do these things. As a result, men hold the high level jobs but this does not mean they are very good at what they do. If the government set a quota for hiring women to do high level work, such as working in the government itself, then perhaps women would be more inspired to be ambitious in their life plans and contribute to a less-than perfect society.
        　　(second reason) Furthermore, regulations in the workplace for hiring women would not be a new thing. Although not written or made into law, there seems to be rules for who can and cannot have high-level jobs. For instance, if a man and a woman both competed for the presidency of a company or even the country, and both were equally qualified and had the same experience and background, there is little doubt who would get the job. Even more, if the man was less qualified and less experienced than the woman, the man would still probably get the job because of his sex. Therefore, to legislate a percentage of high level jobs for women would work to fight the unwritten sexist rules of the workplace.
        　　Other points of view: 3-different arguments against my opinion.
        　　On the other hand, there are many arguments against the use of a quota system for women. It is true that the injustice and discrimination could be reversed. This is to say that some qualified men might be denied a job while some unqualified women would be given one. Also, the problem of sexism at work could be worsened instead of being overcome. People would doubt whether a women with a high level job was "truly capable"--men might feel bitterness and resentment, while women might think less of themselves and begin to depend on government "charity". Furthermore, there is the problem of defining what is a high-level job and determining an appropriate percentage. ( Final statement that supports my opinion again.)→ Nonetheless, a quota system would break down some barriers in the short-term. Sexism in the workplace will not just magically disappear.
            
            

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        　　Since cities have changed a lot, the size of the cities has grown enormously. Discuss the causes and consequence of the enormous size of cities.
        　　Nowadays, the maps of cities are updated frequently. With the development of city, more and more suburbs become parts of the city. When the cities in the world are amplifying constantly, people discuss the topic hotly, the causes and consequence of the enormous cities. Different people have different answers by their respective views.
        　　In my opinion, the evolution of society and the development of economy result in the growth of the vast size of cities. Since the number of population in every city is increasing continually, people need a large amount of space to live in. With the progress of the technology, the output of crops rises sharply. Fewer and fewer farmers are required, as a result, more and more villages urbanize. The growth of the cities brings us many huge changes.
        　　There are more job opportunities in the cities. For instance, China will hold the Olympic Games in Beijing in 2008. The government is amplifying the size of Beijing to build new gyms in order to hold it excellently. Obviously, people in the cities could gain a lot of new jobs.
        　　Of course, the enormous size of cities also has bad effects. Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world with the amplification of the cities. For example, the poisonous gas sent off by factories and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe. Water waste keeps pouring into rivers and lakes; as a result, many water species are dying out. Furthermore, more people the city have, more rubbish we can find.
        　　In a word, since each coin has two sides, we should be acquainted clearly with the reasons why the size of the cities has grown enormously and what it will bring us. Thus, we could make full use of the positive effects and overcome the negative effects.
            
            

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        　　In recent years, more and more advertisements have been flooding into our lives. Some advertisements exert negative effects on the youth. Therefore some people suggest that advertisements be banned. Do you agree or disagree with this? Give your reasons.
        　　Along with the rapid progress of society, the advertising industry has undergone remarkable development. Every day we are surrounded by all kinds of ads and commercials, which have a profound influence on our daily lives. As a result, there arises a fierce debate concerning the proposal that we should ban all kinds of advertisements.
        　　On one hand, some people are in favor of the idea that advertisement should not be banned; instead it should be further developed. They are of the opinion that advertisement is a good channel which helps promote the exchanges of information. In an era of information, everyone can benefit a lot from the advertisements, not only the manufacturers but the customers. Moreover, the advertisement enables people to catch up with the amazing advance in all fields. From the mushrooming advertisements, people get to know some newest products and the trend of consumption. Thirdly, advertising, to some extent, is not only an industry but an art. Many advertisements are elaborate works of art full of ingenuity and originality, which render great spiritual pleasure to the viewers and add to the picturesque cityscape. In a word, the advertisement is a blessing for modern people.
        　　Despite the benefits advertisement has brought us, many people strongly condemn it, saying that they have been fed up with all kinds of rubbish ads. They call for a comprehensive ban on the advertisement based on the following reasons. First of all, a majority of advertisements are fictitious and misleading, causing confusion in people’s daily life and even leading to the injury and death of some customers. Secondly, they bring many inconveniences and troubles to us. For example, are you pleased with a mailbox stuffed with unwanted ads or a wonderful film on TV being interrupted frequently? Furthermore, the non-standard use of language in advertisement brings about irreparable damage to the integrity and purity of our language. Consequently, it will exert a disastrous impact on the literacy of our younger generations. In some people’s eyes, the advertisement is just a Genie out of the bottle.
        　　To be frank, it is quite impossible for people to reach an absolute consensus on most controversial issues. To my mind, a total ban on advertisement is not an ideal and practical choice. How can we imagine all advertisements vanishing overnight? The demerits should by no means make us lose sight of the benefits advertisements have brought to us. A more workable and rational attitude should be adopted; that is, to eliminate the false and retain the true. Always bear in mind the old saying:“never throw away the baby with bath water.”
            
            

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        　　Companies should encourage old employees (55 years old) to retire, in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
        　　Nowadays, plenty of employees who are more than 55 years old must retire because of company policy; therefore, many people think that the development of a company cannot be separated from the number of young employees. The above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.
        　　The main reason is that plenty of young employees mean that the company is infused with lots of young blood. With the development of technology, more and more new technological products have been developed. The new generation masters advanced technology and have the energy to exploit. They have learned lots of knowledge in the university; therefore it is definitely useful for the development of companies.
        　　Another reason is that old employees cannot adapt themselves to the rapid pace. Old employees find it difficult to learn new things rapidly. With their limited physical strength, they are not capable of heavy manual work. So old employees are not a patch on young employees, it means not only intellect but also physical strength.
        　　Last but not the least reason is that old employees have already worked for more than half of their lifetime, so they should retire to enjoy life. The old employees have already paid out too much in order to look after their families and careers. So they should pursue their hobbies.
        　　In conclusion, old employees shouldn’t continue working for themselves. Moreover, advancement of society needs a new generation.
            
            

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        　　According to a recent survey ,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
        　　依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病。
        　　The latest surveys show that Quiet a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
        　　最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。
        　　No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
        　　没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
        　　People seem to fail to takesintosaccount the fact that education does not end with graduation.
        　　人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
        　　Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.
        　　许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。
        　　Nowadays ,many students always gosintosraptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately ,for most young people ,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.
        　　当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈.然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。
        　　In view of the seriousness of this problem ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
        　　考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。
        　　proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.
        　　应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。
        　　an increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city .However ,this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents ,who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.
        　　越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。.然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,象犯罪和卖淫。
        　　Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus ,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
        　　许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。
        　　There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem :the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.
        　　无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。
        　　An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.
            
            

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        　　一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。.
        　　a proper part-time job does not occupy student's too much time .In fact ,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study .As an old saying goes :All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
        　　一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。
        　　Any government which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.
        　　任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。
        　　An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.
        　　越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。
        　　When it comes to education ,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
        　　说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。
        　　The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
        　　大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
        　　It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.
        　　无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冬的痛苦生活。
        　　Although this view is widely held ,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
        　　尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点任何年龄进行。
        　　No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.
        　　没有人能否人这一事实:教育是人生最重要的一方面。
        　　People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer .
        　　人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。