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9-10月雅思大作文一级预测之政府类别2

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发表于 2016-7-10 15:15:12 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  话题二 政府花钱在什么地方
  
  A government's priority should be to provide health care and education for its own citizens before providing food for hungry people in other countries.
  To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  
  框架
  开头:按国家经济状况分情况
  中间2段
  1 没钱的赞助本国教育医疗
  2 有钱的赞助穷国。
  结尾:分情况综述。
  
  模板范文(来源于新东方内部)
  
  Governments have to make difficult decisions sometimes about where their priorities lie. One such decision is how much of their annual budget they should set aside for helping the poor in other countries. In my opinion, each country needs to look at its own situation when deciding this issue.
  
  中间1
  In the case of a very poor country, all its finances need to go into educating the next generation and providing health care for its own citizens, because the country's future development depends on this.(P)
  Take, for example, an African country suffering from widespread AIDS, where parents are dying and the country has many orphans. The government has very serious issues to deal with in supporting these children. If it gives money away to other countries when its own children need food, education and medical care, this would be a tragedy and is likely to have grave consequences for the future.
  
  中间2
  P: The situation is quite different for wealthier countries, the majority of whose citizens enjoy luxuries such as an abundance of food, good schooling systems and free health care. These countries generally use more than their fair share of the world's resources.
  For example, they use more fossil fuels and as a result, they often create more pollution. In my opinion, they have a corresponding responsibility to support others who consume less, and to relieve some of the burden of poverty and distress in the world.
  
  结尾
  In summary, I believe that poor countries do not need to support other poor countries; however, wealthier countries have an obligation to give to others who are not so fortunate.
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