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　　题目：维护道路安全是否靠加强违章惩罚（该文在9月10日考试中获8分）
　　雅思学员 赖敏玲（商务英语专业学生9月10日雅思考试获总分八，听力、阅读九分；写作八分）
　　Recent years have witnessed a worsening trend in road safety. According to statistics from the local authority, the number of traffic accidents in 2004 was 20% greater than that of the previous year.
　　The issue is gaining more and more concern of the public, some of whom propose that stricter punishment on traffic offenders should be the only way to ensure road safety. As far as I am concerned, I hold that punishment should not be only solution to the problem.
　　There is certainly no denying that stricter penalties may to some extent bring down the number of accidents on motorways as a deterrent to driving offences. Besides, the government may enjoy a greater revenue from severer fines, which can in turn be used to improve road conditions.
　　However, we shall never overlook the other side of the coin: punishment has its downsides. Fines, as the most common penalty for driving violations, tend to instill in people the misconception that money can pay off their guilt and resolve the problem. As a result, we can see many cases where the traffic offender commits the same or another mistake even after having been fined a lot. In spite of heavier punishment, road safety cannot be enhanced unless drivers are equipped with sufficient driving skills and knowledge. Recently there have emerged many irresponsible driving schools that have produced a host of unqualified drivers, contributing to more traffic offences. Thus tight control on driving schools and the driving testing system is needed as well to improve road safety.
　　Furthermore, advertisements and campaigns concerned should be launched to raise the public awareness. When people are fully aware of the importance of abiding traffic rules, accidents may hopefully be eliminated.
　　From the above discussion, it is clear that only stricter punishment is not enough to enhance road safety. Instead, it should go hand in hand with closer control on driving schools and the testing system as well as higher public awareness.
            
            

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　　题目：维护道路安全是否靠加强违章惩罚（7分作文）
　　雅思学员 马婷婷（商务英语专业学生9月10日雅思考试获总分八，听力九分、阅读、口语八分）
　　In recent years, increasing number of car accidents have claimed many people's lives. The topic of whether stricter punishments is the only way to prevent accidents has triggered heated discussion. Notions on this issue vary greatly.
　　According to the advocates, stricter punishment is the most effective way to reduce car accidents. To begin with, stricter punishment deters reckless driving behavior, like drunk driving and speeding.
　　Drivers must learn to abide by the laws and regulations otherwise they will suffer from great loss. Furthermore, severely punished, drivers may learn a lesson and they are less likely to repeat the same behavior on the road. Last but not least, psychologically hurt and physically injured, victims of car accidents deserve the financial compensation from drivers.
　　However, opponents are strongly against stricter punishment. Firstly, competent authorities should set up stricter requirements for driver’s licence. More lectures and courses should be provided to would-be drivers. Secondly, facilities should be improved in order to reduce road hazards. For instance, electronic notice board should be set up to drivers of the danger ahead. Finally, if drivers are sentenced to jail for a longer time, more police power and money is needed to manage them. That is to say,stricter punishment will produce heavy burden on tax payers.
　　Personally speaking, stricter punishment is by no means the best solution to car accidents. More scientific measures should be adopted so as to reduce car accidents on the road.
            
            

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　　题目：如何解决垃圾问题（7分作文）
　　启德雅思学员 罗巾如（8月6日雅思考试获总分7.5，听力8，阅读8.5，写作、口语7）
　　The roads are dotted with trash, the railways are littered with decaying garbage and our cities are disgraced by plastic bags. Lately, the worsening rubbish problem has aroused people’s wide concern.
　　Some hold the belief that it is an overstatement to claim that people have formed a “throw away” society, and that they just discard the used items, which is necessary. Others, however, firmly contend that people do develop a habit of throwing things away. Personally, I firmly side with the latter.
　　It is no doubt that our cities are on the way towards becoming a huge landfill. To begin with, people are in the habit of littering. Nowadays, people tend to discard old items like outdated furniture and worn-out appliance, which are actually recoverable. Furthermore, due to the inadequate facilities of garbage collection, people throw away their refuse everywhere at will. In addition, rubbish is in rapid increase. In the first place the quickening tempo of modern lifestyle gives rise to people’s favor of disposable items for sake of convenience, which greatly adds the amount of rubbish. In the second place, the development of science and technology also contributes to it. It generates new product in a more frequent way, which makes the old ones cast aside as rubbish at a quicker pace. Consequently, our cities are decorated with trash..
　　In view of the severity of the issue, we should adopt immediate measure to address it. First of all, the government should play a leading role. It ought to bring in strong anti-littering laws, backed by heavy penalties and effective enforcement, to tackle the littering behaviors. Also, officials should make good use of mass media to promote the public’s awareness of environmental protection, making sure that everyone will become a conscious environment protector. Additionally, scientists can develop efficient technologies to degrade and recycle the rubbish. Research findings reveal that 63% of the refuse nowadays are recycled. Finally, it is essential for schools to attach importance to environmental education, so that every child will become environmentally friendly and get rid of the littering habit.
　　In conclusion, people’s littering habit is turning our communities into a rubbish holder. It is high time that we took joint effort to solve the rubbish problem. Otherwise, we will live with rubbish in the future.
            
            

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　　题目：移居外国的人应不应该接受当地的文化（7分作文）
　　雅思学员 罗倩敏
　　Nowadays, more and more people would like to move to other countries and settle down for better natural environment, and more educational opportunities. Whether these new settlers should accept new countries’ values and lifestyles has become a public focus. Before presenting my own opinion, I think it is essential to analyze both sides of the issue.
　　People in favor of acceptance to new values claim that once you live in a new environment, you have to adapt yourself to the new community. If not, you would feel psychologically isolated.
　　Moreover, getting yourself in the new environment, you can develop a better career, for your employer will consider you to be an adaptable person. And your family also can get themselves involved in the new community. Last but not least, as you accept the new values and lifestyles, you can learn something new apart from your own culture.
　　Those who are against, however, argue that if the settlers accept new values and culture, they are considered to betray their own countries, so they no longer belong to their countries. Furthermore, new settlers are supposed to keep their own styles. For instance, their eating habits, religion believes, and so on. Last of all, it is a good way to preserve their tradition and culture, especially the ethnic, who are in minority of people.
　　Personally speaking, I tend to side with the former view. Though people should have their unique styles, it is crucial to adjust to the new environment and community. An old saying just illustrates my point: When in Rome, do as the Roman.
            
            

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　　题目：应否使用动物做实验
　　启德雅思学员 李辽7分作文
　　Nowadays, experimental usage of animal has become a widely concerned issue around the world. People hold diverse views towards it.
　　Adversaries claim that it is an extremely crude behavior. Animals, especially mammals, like dogs, cats, rabbits, rats, which are the major victims in the experimentation, are usually human’s pets. Pet owners are strongly against it for they firmly believe that animals suffer physically and mentally as we do. When equality is advocated in the modern world, it is inhuman to disrespect creatures that are not human beings. Furthermore, a number of experts pointed out that it would be at high stake of depending on the results of animal experiment; since they differ from us in many ways. Take the body structure for example, we can’t imagine humans try to jump from the height of nine stories without any protection because cats survive out of the same test.
　　Those in favor of the idea about usage of animal declare that using animal is an advisable choice. On one hand because their bodies are similar in function to ours. For instance, they catch colds, suffer from stomachs and heart diseases, which more importantly influenced by diet and habits. The consequences of the test may not be applied to humans, although they are highly connected to the human situations. On the other hand, those creatures yell and act abnormally when they feel uncomfortable, which is what exactly researchers expect. In addition, there is an easy-to-answer question: isn’t it crueler to test directly on people with little knowledge on the objects’ effects? In a word, there is nothing better than animal that resemble human the best for experiment.
　　Personally, I am not a supporter of animal experiments, yet there is anything more suitable can replace them, I accept using animals for tests, but take good care of them when they are not in the laboratory.
            
            

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　　题目：维护道路安全是否靠加强违章惩罚（7分作文）
　　启德雅思学员 黄文婷
　　Whether stricter punishments is the only way to prevent accidents from happening on roads has triggered a controversial debate Attitudes towards this issue vary greatly. It is wiser to take a closer look at both sides before I present my opinion.
　　Advocates firmly believe that it is sensible to impose stricter penalty on those who break the traffic rules. Drivers will be more careful when they consider the punishment hard to afford. As the fine is not high,it is not deterrent . According to a survey , among the drivers questioned , 65% of them admit that they pay more attention to driving if more serious punishments are carried out .
　　Opponents, however, hold the view that there are other aspects which can decrease the frequency of accidents. Firstly, road constructions should be more rational. Nowadays, more and more roads and highways are being built, but some of them were not designed appropriately, which sometimes cause traffic accidents. Secondly, pedestrians should heighten their safety awareness while crossing the roads . Some pedestrians disobey rules and regulations, which should assume the responsibilities of accidents and be penalized. The last but not least, the growing amount of private cars is a contributing factor, the government should put forward some feasible means to control the number of cars, such as imposing higher tax or limiting the cars running on roads at rush hours .
　　As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the latter view. Only stricter punishment is not insufficient access to decrease accidents., other methods should be enforced simultaneously , such as reinforcing supervising and setting digital camera on roads .
            
            

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　　题目：移居外国的人应不应该接受当地的文化（7分作文）
　　启德雅思学员 叶绿菁（中文系学生）
　　A much-debated issue these days is whether people should accept the different values and the new lifestyle when they move to a new country. It has become a focus of public interest. Notions about it vary greatly. People can hardly reach an absolute consensus and therefore it is wise to take a closer look at the arguments at both sides before I present my pinion.
　　Advocates of this hot issue hold the belief that it is imperative for people to accept the different values and the new lifestyle when they settle in a new country. To begin with, it is beneficial for immigrants to adapt social life if they learn more about the local culture and lifestyle, especially for children. It is easily for them to make friends with others in schools. Moreover, it is necessary for settlers to change their lifestyle and accept the new values. When in Roma, do as the Romans do. Last of all, immigrants will feel isolated and depressed if they have no idea about the culture and lifestyle of this country.
　　Some other people, however, are strongly against this hit issue for several reasons. First and foremost, it is ridiculous for people to abandon their original culture and lifestyle when they move to a new country. Furthermore, it is a breach of one’s basic right if me ask them to change their lifestyle. We should show greater respect for each other’s religions and cultures. Last but not least, it is significant for people to maintain cultural diversity as it is vital for people to pass their culture on to their offsprings. Meanwhile, it would be a pity for the descendants to know nothing about the culture of their ancestors.
　　In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter. It is sensible for immigrants to keep their culture and lifestyle when they move to a new country.
            
            

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　　题目：小学是否应该开设体育锻炼课（G类7分作文）
　　启德雅思学员 王颖
　　It is certainly a controversial issue whether or not sports and exercises should be held in the primary school. This issue has intrigued not only some psychologists and scholars but also some parents and students. People retain diverse opinions towards this public focus. Before rendering my opinion, it is essential to explore this complicated phenomenon from both sides .
　　The advocators generally hold a belief that it offers a host of great benefits to student’s early education. To begin with, it instills a strong sense of responsibility which it is necessary to their future success. Children are now in the formative years, they are not mature enough so that they are vulnerable to some social evils and easily go astray. Moreover, it can increase the mutual understanding and promote friendship between teachers and students,thus forming a brand new type of student-teacher relationship. It is a symbol of student-oriented education and a step forward towards quality education. Last but not least, sports and exercises subjects help to cultivate teamwork spirits and learn to compromise and cooperate. Therefore, it creates school ethos and a sense of belonging to a particular community. As such it promotes discipline and helps to drive up academic standards.
　　The opponents, however, are strongly against to this stance for the following mentioned aspects. Primarily, the system may lead to the spread of competitive, thus breeds a series of psychological problems, such as depression, negativity, selfishness, self-centeredness, introversion, suspicion, anxiety and shame which destroy character and relationships. Furthermore, sports may exert a negative impact on one’s study because it occupies too much valuable time of a student. A student’s sole task is to make good use of his limited time to acquire knowledge and skills which are essential to his future career.
　　In the final analysis, both sides have its sound effects. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to consent to the former. I firmly believe that sports and exercise courses play an active role in raising the development of student’s intelligence quotient, adverse quotient and emotional quotient which should be highly promoted in the primary school.
            
            

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　　雅思学员 马婷婷同学的雅思满分心得（A 类）
　　在9月10号的雅思考试中,我拿到听力满分,总分8分的成绩,自己也吓了一跳. 回想2个多月的复习,除了自己平时的努力以外,启德老师们教的考试技巧是非常有帮助的!
　　首先是听力的花花老师最后一堂课给的复习计划.因为复习时间有限,有一个行之有效的计划是很重要的,花花在最后一节课给我们列出了一个复习表，建议我们在距离考试还有多少天的时候该做什么.根据这个表，再根据自己的情况调整一下,这样至少可以保证考试前,不会发现自己还有一大堆练习没有做,很多东西没有复习到,忧心忡忡,唉声叹气啦.
　　听力:有了复习计划，就可以疯狂的逼自己复习啦.我觉得有的功夫是每天都要做的,比如听力.听得越多,耳朵会越敏感. 这个时候最好就是抓紧一切时间听英语.比如说,平时爱看韩剧的，这个时候就看美国的肥皂剧啦.MP3里面也可以放一些谈话节目,或者是新闻,坐车,吃饭,洗衣服的时候可以听一下. 复习时间比较充裕的烤鸭,可以每天选一段十分钟的VOA或BBC的新闻听写,每个字都写下来,也可以提高耳朵敏感度. 考试前,最好就是一天一套题。至于做题,我觉得花花教的划关键字和猜所填的词的类型很重要.关键词可以帮助定位,知道自己听到哪里.如果错过了前一题,但是听到了下一题的关键字,就必须马上放弃,往下做.听力只有一次机会,所以一定要懂得放弃啊. 猜类型的作用是,有时候听到一大句话,但不知道填哪一个词,如果事先猜了类型,就可以减少犹豫的时间,马上听下一题.而且根据听力课上的“单复数原则”也可以减少单复数,时态的错误.
　　还有一点,就是细心.我们这一群白云山广外下来的人更应该注意,在剑1,剑2的错题中,60%--70%都是大小写,单复数错的.打击狂大!所以考试之前,我会把因为不细心而错的题再看一遍,提醒自己考试的时候一定要细心!
　　口语: 我觉得考口语就像job interview一样,要有礼貌,有自信,能够给考官留下良好的印象.所以最好就是面带微笑,昂首挺胸,而且要有 eye contact. 准备Part 2,一定要cover到够多的题目,同样的题目最好能讲好几次,这样上场之前就不会心慌. 我的做法就是,找一个没有人的地方,把收集到的题目都开口讲一遍,然后把没有表达好的意思查字典,再讲一遍.对于一些比较难讲的题目,如food, building,park等等,可以上网查资料,或者跟别的烤鸭研究一下. 准备Part 3时,我们一起考的几个同学每天针对同一个topic发表讨论,这样子可以参考别人的答案与思维方式,也可以锻炼一种快速思考和组织语言的能力. 考试当天,最好能够早一点到考场,除了冷静心情,更重要的是跟已经考过的学生交流交流,说不定对自己的发挥有所启发.
　　阅读: 我觉得做阅读的方法每个人都不一样,最重要的是找到一个适合自己的.这就需要考前做一定量的题目,去寻找一个比较好的方法.高德立老师讲的东西很多都是很有用的，比如说,通过看核心词汇加快阅读速度, 通过key words去定位答案的位置等. 阅读一个比较大的困难是时间不够,这次很多同学考完都抱怨说没有做完.所以考前一定要训练自己20分钟以内做完一篇.
　　写作: 前面几科考前不准备还可以勉强过关,但是作文不准备就写不出来.无论是task one 还是task two考前每一种题型最好都写几次,自己要总结自己模版,套句要背.为了掌握时间,我在练习时就在一小时内两个task一起写,可以逼自己写快一点.吴建业老师的那本绿色《最新雅思考试胜策——写作》很有用,里面针对各种题目都有议论,看的时候我喜欢先自己用十大原则想观点,然后对比书上的观点,最后把里面的好词好句记下来.
　　除了上课,网上的论坛也很重要.那里有很多人很惨痛的教训,也有很多很好的方法,有空就上去转一转就会有意想不到的收获哦. 还有一点,最好跟几个同学组成一个group一起复习,有很多资源可以共享,也可以互相学习。
            
            

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　　雅思学员 曾政森 A类 九月十七日考试取得了听力满分
　　首先，不能忘本，感谢花花，建业兄，靓仔高老师，和口语老师～
　　关于听力，我只能说——狂听。我的备考方法是，找listen to this 中级和高级的听力内容（mp3格式）放在随身听，每天上学放学，没事就听，自己创造一个语言环境，使自己的生活充满英语，我想，这样对培养语感跟听感还挺有作用的。但是，我发现一个问题，如果时常听者听力的话，虽然英语的环境是熟悉了，但是有可能弱化在听的同时挑词的能力，因为我听着听着就会放松下来。所以在听的过程中，我会适当的“用力”去听，我这的“用力”的意思就是时不时的专心听一听listen to this 的内容，专到一个词都不放过，我觉得这样能培养我在考试的过程中听到某个关键词后挑出来的能力。这是平时的练。另外，每天定量的模拟练习也是很重要。我记得花花说过，回家不断的做启德教材上的听力（启德的那本听力教材里面收了剑桥1，2，3的部分听力，都挺多的了，大概有8份吧），即使之前做过也好，以后还要回过头来做。
　　我坚信着花花老师，每天晚上都做一份听力，半个小时不用，虽然花的时间少，但是很有用，熟悉题型，锻炼听题技巧，培养考场意识什么的都考它了。最后一点，我是9.17考的，听说听力全都是机经有的，所以考完很后悔没有看机经，所以说机经还是很有用滴，不是说一定要靠它猜题，但机经也是不错的平时练习材料啊！
　　写作：还清楚记得我的思路，总的来说，还是运用建业兄的写作方法，一点一点写清楚，十大原则挑几个来讲，思路就会很清晰。大作文是一个argumentation型的题，题目是要我们判断人类用动物做试验好不好。第一段：用动物做试验已经成为一个国家间，甚至国家与国家之间热门的话题，在发表我的观点之前，我希望就此话题做一下讨论。第二段：许多的科学家，医学家都非常赞成用动物做试验，好处是：1.在金钱上，动物能节省试验金额，因为一些试验性动物繁殖简单，周期短等等，2.健康方面，由于一些动物与人类的身体脏器构造相似，所以用动物做试验能发明更多多人体有用的药物，治疗方法等等。3.在教育方面，动物试验使更多的学生能清楚的认识身体各个机能的运作等等。第三段：用动物来做试验，遭到了许多人，特别是一些人文学家，批评家的反对。他们的理由是：1.就文化而言，他们认为动物也是生命，人们没有随便剥夺动物生命的权利，2.就医学方面而言，人们过分依赖动物，而减少自身的研究，可能会造成医疗效果的不确定等等。第四段：我认为，用动物做试验是可取的，试想一下，如果没有这些试验，人们将会受到多少疾病威胁。但是，我觉得，我们的政府应该规范这种试验，坚决抵制不正常途径的试验。