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背景介绍：
Who should be the one to go out of 'the world of mooncake'?
As for this arguement, the olive nut mooncake has become the first to bear the brunt. However, who should be the one to go out of 'the world of mooncake' on earth?
话题：
Who do you think is the one to go out of the world of mooncake?
范例1：
It is those unscrupulous merchants who earn money without caring about the safty of the food should get out of the world of mooncake instead of the poor olive nut mooncake. Here comes two reasons.
First of all, most of the merchants find out that cute and beautiful outer packing can draw more attention from the customers. It is not bad to give those delicious mooncakes charming outer packing. Nevertheless, packing can not be the whole of the moooncakes. After all, food is for eating. The flavour is of the significance. In addition, the safty of the food is the solid foundation. No one will buy a box of mooncakes which are unhealthy just for the charming outer packing.
In the end, no matter what kind of mooncakes,or other food else, safty and flavour should be the salespoint decorated by the beautiful packing. As a result, those unscrupilous merchants, get out of the world of the mooncake!
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发表于 2016-8-9 09:20:17