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《英文天天写》是沪江部落一档写作类节目，其目的在于提升大家的英语写作能力。每期节目主持人都会给出一个话题，积极参加的童鞋还会得到主持人的专业点评哦！想提高英语写作的童鞋千万不要错过哦！
背景介绍：
On July 6th,2013, an aeroplane, Boeing 777, crashed when landing at the San Francisco International Airport. Two Chinese students died in this crash, and more than 180 others injured. I sincerely express my deepest condolences over the death.
According to reports, there is a 70-people group of students who go to United States for overseas study tour on aboard. This special group has caused a national-wide discuss towards the sweeping trends, sending our children to overseas study tour, in many cities of China. So here comes the first topic of this week:
1. What do you think about the overseas study tour?
Dangerous as it may seem, air travel is the safest way of long distance travel. The emergence of cheap air travel enables an increasing number of people choose it as the priority travel forms. Some people, however, argue that the booming of passengers travelled by air make serious air pollution to our environment. So the second topic is:
2. Nowadays cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world. To what extent do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
The first experience of taking an aeroplane is unforgettable for most of us. Here is the third topic:
3. Please share us your experience of first flight.
2013年7月6日，一架波音777客气在旧金山国际机场降落时坠毁。事故造成2名中国籍学生死亡，另有180人受伤。我在此诚挚地表达对死者最深切的哀思。
根据报道，飞机上有一个70人的学生团体，他们原计划去美国参加海外游学项目。这个特殊的团体在国内引起了全国性的争论：国内现在越来越多城市开始兴起将小孩送到国外参加海外游学项目，究竟是好还是坏？
话题：
1、你怎么看待海外游学项目？
尽管看起来危险，但乘坐飞机旅行却是长距离旅行中最安全的方式。廉价航空的兴起使得越来越多的人们将乘飞机出游作为他们的首选。然而，有些人认为正是因为乘坐飞机的人数大量增长，造成了对环境的严重污染。所以第二个话题是：
2、如今廉价航空在世界上越来越被人们所接收。对此，在何种程度上你认为打折的航空旅行是利大于弊的？
第一次乘坐飞机的旅行对于大多数人来讲都是难忘的。第三个话题是：
3、和大家分享一下你的第一次乘坐飞机的经验。
范例1：
Fantastic as it may seem, overseas studytour is actually not as attractive as we thought. And the sweeping trends inmany cities of sending our kids to aeroplanes to other countries are, more orless, questionable. In my opinion, both parents and kids have to choose itwithin their capabilities.
Admittedly, overseas study tours are morelike short term overseas trips, which could not bring our offspring significantchanges to their English. A glance of those famous universities, obviously, is insufficient for inspiring them of studying industriously. Actually, most overseasstudy tours resemble a luxury and exotic trip of other countries. And it ishard to believe that our offspring could learn a plenty of meaningfulexperience in tours like these.
Furthermore, according to reports, afortnight trip will charge parents up to 30 grands of money. It is a largefortune in terms of an overseas travel. And I strongly believe that ourchildren could gain more valuable experience at an expense of much less money.Traveling around China, for example, is another way of extending one’s horizon.Or being a volunteer of teaching needy children in rural areas is believed as abetter approach of teaching our kids to cherish the life they already have aswell as flaring their curriculum vitaes in applying a university.
Lastly, 30 grands for a fortnight tripoutside China is a big burden for some families, which may not afford such anexpense. The same thing happens to their children. Those children may be isolated from their peers because they have not been to abroad and do not havethe same breathtaking topics to share with. This harmful comparison betweenchildren will, without any doubt, shape our offspring’s characters as well asvalue systems in wrong directions.
To summarise, I do not side for blindedoverseas study tours. And we should choose it within our capabilities.
范例2：
Everything’s hard in the beginning and so does my first flight. It was a flight from Shanghai to San Francisco and needless to say I was quite looking forward to it. Unfortunately, my happiness and excitement about the brand-new exotic life went to extremes and I inevitably caught a bad cold together with a high fever, which was virtually devastating on a plane with its air conditioning fully on. To make matters worse, it was impossible to get a single glass of hot water on board and the thin blanket can’t add any warmth to my freezing body. All the bad news sum up together, my illness being deteriorated. The former wish to get a good view at the window became extravagant and what I could do was taking pills and pushing myself into sleep despite the roaring engines. The good news was that I got over from the disease shortly afterwards and I was able to cherish my hope on my return flight.
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发表于 2016-8-9 09:20:01