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《英文天天写》是沪江部落一档写作类节目，其目的在于提升大家的英语写作能力。每期节目主持人都会给出一个话题，积极参加的童鞋还会得到主持人的专业点评哦！想提高英语写作的童鞋千万不要错过哦！
背景介绍：
It is getting hotter recently. Summer is coming. Yesterday, when I drove home, the sky is bright blue and the shinning sky becomes cute.
话题：
What kind of color you would choose to describe early summer？
范例1：
I think my summer holiday is dark and gloomy because there are so many things waiting for me. First，I hope to recite new concept English for when I entered daily English group，I found I am like a leaf to a big tree，I need to improve my English continously. Secondly，I should learn driving. My summer holiday is like a bubble because of that. Thirdly，I have to pick up my poor French at least I can recite reflet。How pity I am！Howeve，the things I list above are all I want to do not be forced to. Just like Jobs made speech in Stanford umiversity，stay hungry，stay foolish.
范例2：
I`d like to choose red to describe my early summer days. Red is the colour of fire, which stands for passion and enthusiasm. I’m kind of crazy about playing basketball. In the recent several weeks, owing to the fine weather, I played basketball at least twice a week with my friends. Running, shooting, passing the ball, I enjoyed the feeling of being a teammate as well. Also, the good news that Miami Heat, my favourite basketball team, achieved to get into the NBA Finals make the summer brighter. I appreciate their change of playing smarter as well as their great team spirit. Last but not the least, I’m fond of Heat’s Jersey which is fully red.
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发表于 2016-8-9 09:19:40