1、不要再用 more and more了;该词组被评为中国恶俗词组榜第一!!老师说可以用a growing number of..
2、inevitable——不可避免
3、should/would/could/may/might;为什么要用这个5个词?首先，语气比较委婉，不会很肯定，显的谦虚;其次，可以不考虑动词的形式;所以这五个词被称为最贱的词。
4、physically beneficial——身体健康;副词+形容词的表达方式，比较好看。
5、worldwide/globly/internationally famous——举世闻名
7、开头方法一：
Background
Controversy (2 different/opposite ideas)
As/Being a controversial issue.... 作为有争议的问题....
Now days， the issue on....is highly debatable， and ideas vary from person to person——不同的人有不同的观点。(不要用different people)
Some would claim....，while some others may suggest....—— 一些人认为....另一些人认为....
Some would claim....，while the idea....is still held by some others. ——Idea倒装，句子更好看。不能用some或者the other，这样只有两种可能性，太绝对。
8、5个常用单词的替代
Think → claim / suggest / believe / advocate / maintain / suppose
Good → beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positive
Bad → harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negative
Advantage → merit / virtue / benefit / profit / pro
Disadvantage → demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con / cost
9、few 0-1 几乎没有
A few 一些，不多
Several 若干
10、赞成某个观点
As for me，I side with the fomer/latter
中立观点
As far as I am concerned, I believe both views have their own merits and con coexit
11、like a double-edged sword 双刃剑
12、sth. can be neither absolutely perfect nor purely harmful
13、末段(总结)
All in all/to conclude/in conclusion/in general/ to sum up
When all the above-mentioned factors are taken into consideration, a conclusion could be drawn that … (主要用来凑字数)
14、On one hand.... contribute greatly to....
On the other hand/On the contrary/
15、in contrast，the demerits of....can not be ignored.
16、作文重点，其实就是不能重复;不要用一些恶俗的词，people等;少用第一和第二人称;多变幻句式;少用主动句;注意符号;
发表于 2016-7-10 14:44:19