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1. 句子的主语和谓语不一致
2. 时态
3. 名词的单复数
4. 定冠词和不定冠词
5. 搭配
6. 单词的拼写
例一，
错误：More and more people believe smoking do harm to health, waste money. (主谓不一致)
正确：More and more people believe smoking does harm to health, and is a waste of money.
例二，
错误：If the law said that the man who destroy the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be less people to do that. (时态)
正确：If the law says that the man who destroys the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be fewer offenders.
例三，
错误：So some of the wildlives become homeless and extinction. (名词的单复数)
正确：So some of the wildlife become homeless and extinct.
例四，
错误：For above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all problems it causes will be solved. (定冠词)
正确：For the above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all the problems it causes will be solved.
例五，
错误：Although the light is weak, it plays a great effect which will make people more firmly than before. (搭配)
正确：Although the light is weak, it has a great effect which will make people more firm than before.
例六，
错误：We should take effective methods to deduce the number of fishing boats in the sea. (拼写)
正确：We should take effective measures to reduce the number of fishing boats in the sea. |
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发表于 2016-7-10 14:43:44