英语写作：大学英语四级考试高分作文是这样练成的

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　　四级写作造句应避免的七大问题
        　　词性不分
        　　词性不分是英语造句中的忌讳。英语注重形态，词性和用法是相对应的，例如名词是绝对不可以充当谓语的，而充当谓语的绝对不允许由形容词单独承担。所以如果词性错了就意味着其用法也可能出错，这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响。造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点：
        　　第一，动词要分清及物与否，不及物动词不直接跟宾语，不用于被动语态。
        　　第二，分清楚形容词和动词，形容词不能做谓语，动词的谓语形式不能做表语。
        　　第三，动词的谓语形式 (有时、体、态、气的形态表示) 和动词的非谓语形式 (动名词、不定式、分词) 要区别开来。
        　　第四，要分清现在分词和过去分词的使用场合。
        　　第五，意义相同但词性不同的词要特别注意。
        　　第六，拼写相同但意义不同、词性不同的词也要特别注意。
        　　巩固练习：改正句子。
        　　1. China has occurred the great changes in recent years.
        　　2. He very excellent in many aspects.
        　　3. I can sure that you will see a better film.
        　　4. In this chaotic society, we are more likely to become depress.
        　　5. Human being is a kind of animal fulling of different feelings.
        　　6. Nowadays it is surprised that many students care their appearance and
clothes but rare pay great attention to their study.
        　　7. If you are easily to get frustrated, you will give up.
        　　8. Since you have been keeping a good mood, your teachers would be more
like you.
        　　解析：
        　　1. occur是不及物动词，它的主语应该是事物或结果，原句应改写为:Great changes have occurred in recent
years in China.
        　　2. excellent是形容词，不能充当谓语，它应该与be动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改写为：He is very excellent in
many aspects.
        　　3. sure是形容词，应该和be动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改为：I am sure that you will see a better
film.
        　　4. depress是动词，不能与become等连系动词搭配构成系表结构，原句可以改为：In this chaotic society, we are
more likely to become depressed.
        　　5. full是形容词，不能构成分词形式，原句可以改为：Human being is a kind of animal full of
different feelings.
        　　6. surprised为过去分词演变的形容词，不能修饰物，只能修饰人，原句可以改为：Nowadays it is surprising that
many students care their appearance and clothes but rarely pay great attention
to their study.
        　　7. easily是副词，一般不能与系动词连用，应该用形容词与系动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改为：If you are easy to get
frustrated, you will give up.
        　　8. like既是动词又是介词，但是含义不同，like (v.喜欢)
不能与be动词搭配，more作为副词，修饰动词的位置最好放在动词后面，原句可以改为：Since you have been keeping a good
mood, your teachers would like you better.
        　　人称不一致
        　　人称一致不仅指在一句话中主语应该保持一致，而且在一篇文章中，前后的称谓也应当保持一致，不能出现混乱的情况。
        　　巩固练习：改正句子。
        　　1. They have the right of discussing with her husband.
        　　2. One serious problem that influence a child's healthy development is that
they do not have enough psychological space.
        　　3. Admittedly, there are merit to both arguments. But I do believe that
game do good to children.
        　　4. I often buy clothes on sale because we can save a lot of money that
way.
        　　5. Students often focus on vocabulary, but you need to realize that
vocabulary is only one part of a language.
        　　6. The committee debated whether to allow its families to attend the
dinner.
        　　7. The question that interest us is how we should protect environment from
being polluted further.
        　　8. In other words, one's actions are decided by their mood indirectly.
        　　9. If people have a good mood, he will face everything happened calmly.
        　　正确句子：
        　　1. They have the right of discussing with their husbands.
        　　2. One serious problem that influences a child's healthy development is
that they do not have enough psychological space.
        　　3. Admittedly, there are merits to both arguments. But I do believe that
game do good to children.
        　　4. I often buy clothes on sale because I can save a lot of money that
way.
        　　5. Students often focus on vocabulary, but they need to realize that
vocabulary is only one part of a language.
        　　6. The committee debated whether to allow their families to attend the
dinner.
        　　7. The question that interests us is how we should protect environment from
being polluted further.
        　　8. In other words, one's actions are decided by his mood indirectly.
        　　9. If people have a good mood, they will face everything happened
calmly.
        　　主谓不一致
        　　在四、六级写作中，考生经常出现主谓不一致问题。所谓主谓一致指的是英语句子的主语和谓语在人称和数上应保持一致。它可分为三种情况:
        　　(1)语法一致，即主语为单数形式，谓语动词也采取单数形式;主语为复数形式，谓语动词亦采用复数形式。
        　　(2)意念一致，即从意义着眼处理主谓一致问题。有时，主语形式为单数，但意义为复数，谓语动词依据意义而定，也采取复数形式。
        　　(3)比邻一致，即"就近原则"也就是说谓语动词的人称和数往往应与其最近的主语保持一致。
        　　巩固练习：改正句子。
            
            

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        　　1.Some women are not secretary in the office, instead, they become manager
of the company.
        　　2. Misconceptions about apes has turned a relatively peaceful animal into a
terrifying monster.
        　　3. The rising cost of necessities like food and shelter force many elderly
people to live in poverty.
        　　4. In the distance are a billow of black smoke.
        　　5. Here's the books you want.
        　　6. Neither the union leaders nor the negotiator want the strike to
continue.
        　　7. In eighteenth-century France, makeup and high heels was worn by men.
        　　8. Each of the child's thirty-four stuffed animals have a name and an
entire life history.
        　　解析：
        　　1. Some women are not secretaries in the office; instead, they become
managers of the company.
        　　2. Misconceptions about the ape have turned a relatively peaceful animal
into a terrifying monster.
        　　3. The rising cost of necessities like food and shelter forces many elderly
people to live in poverty.
        　　4. In the distance is a billow of black smoke.
        　　5. Here're the books you want.
        　　6. Neither the union leaders nor the negotiator wants the strike to
continue.
        　　7. In eighteenth-century France, makeup and high heels were worn by
men.
        　　8. Each of the child's thirty-four stuffed animals has a name and an entire
life history.
        　　时态不一致
        　　在造句时要注意时态也应该保持一致。
        　　巩固练习：改正句子。
        　　1. The motorbike was red, and there are two persons on the motorbike.
        　　2. He told me he will be a good tennis player the next year when we met on
a train.
        　　3. If I failed to achieve my desire, I will think it comes from a fate
beyond my power.
        　　4. However, if the goals are obtained, my endless efforts bring them to
me.
        　　5. No one could deny that computers have made our life convenient and make
our work efficient.
        　　6. Depending on computer, many problems can be easily solved, which is not
possible 20 years ago.
        　　解析：
        　　1. The motorbike was red, and there were two persons on the motorbike.
        　　2. He told me he would be a good tennis player the next year when we met on
a train.
        　　3. If I failed to achieve my desire, I would think it comes from a fate
beyond my power.
        　　4. However, if the goals are obtained, my endless efforts will bring them
to me.
        　　5. No one could deny that computers have made our life convenient and made
our work efficient.
        　　6. Depending on computer, many problems can be easily solved, which was not
possible 20 years ago.
        　　指代不清
        　　在使用代词如 it, he, she, this, that, which, one
等的时候，前面的句子中应该出现明确的先行词。如果指代不清，就会造成意思上的混乱。
        　　巩固练习：改正句子。
        　　1. The world's energy demand still continues to rise. How will that ever be
possible for us to get through?
        　　2. Peter told Alan that his wife was unhappy.
        　　3. Marsha attributed her success to her husband's support, which was
generous.
        　　4. Susan's mother wondered if she was tall enough to be a model.
        　　解析：
        　　1. The world's energy demand still continues to rise. How will the
situation ever be possible for us to get through?
        　　2. Peter told Alan, "Your wife is unhappy."
        　　3. Marsha attributed her success to her husband's generous support.
        　　4. Susan's mother wondered if Susan was tall enough to be a model.
        　　断句错误
        　　英语的句子要求主从句直接要由恰当的衔接词连接，并列句也要求用衔接词或分号连接。由于汉语中没有这些要求，句子之间可以用逗号连接，因此，在四、六级作文中，很多同学的英语句子用逗号连接两个各自完整的句子;或将两个句子连接，但是没有使用标点符号或衔接词，以致于造成病句。
        　　巩固练习：改正句子。
        　　1. They read different books just to meet their different needs. Because
different people have different needs to read the different kinds of books.
        　　2. Students and teacher heard Liming went to hospital, all of them went to
visit him.
        　　解析：
        　　1. They read different books just to meet their different needs, because
different people have different needs.
        　　2. When students and teacher heard Liming went to hospital, all of them
went to visit him.
        　　成分残缺
        　　英语的句子虽然结构多样，但都是由基本的句子结构演化扩展而来。如果句子不符合基本的句子结构要求，缺少必要成分或者将从句或短语误当作句子，就不能表达一个完整的意思。由于英语和汉语的表达方法和习惯不同，成分残缺是中国学生在英文写作中容易出现的问题。
            
            

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        　　巩固练习：改正句子。
        　　1. "Is honesty out of date?" many people asked. In my opinion, the answer
should be "no". Because honesty is not a simple social phenomenon, but a kind of
humanity which is rooted in our mind.
        　　2. And then there is no need to worry whether you'll be lost in a strange
place, if you have a cellphone. Especially, in some urgent situations.
        　　3. There are other functions about cellphone. For example,
time-schedule.
        　　4. First, as we all know that cosmetics always contain complex chemical
elements. Which many people will be allergic.
        　　5. First of all, cellphone serves as a convenient way of communication.
Since it allows you to chat with others on the phone whenever you like.
        　　6. First, people deal with wastes carelessly. They pay little attention to
the result of the wastes. Second, the development of industries.
        　　7. In my opinion, honesty becomes more and more important in recent
society. Though the society competition becomes more and more fierce.
        　　8. We can do a lot of things to entertain ourselves in spare time. Like
reading, and listening to music.
        　　9. Personally speaking, friendship is an in-depth relationship combining
trust, support, communication, understanding, empathy, and intimacy. Aspects of
life that all of us crave.
        　　10. Thus, could I make a piece of advice to you that reducing the price of
food?
        　　解析：
        　　1. "Is honesty out of date?" many people asked. In my opinion, the answer
should be"no" because honesty is not a simple social phenomenon, but a kind of
humanity which is rooted in our mind.
        　　2. And then there is no need to worry whether you'll be lost in a strange
place, if you have a cellphone, especially, in some urgent situations.
        　　3. There are other functions about cellphone, for example,
time-schedule.
        　　4. First, we all know that cosmetics always contain complex chemical
elements to which many people will be allergic.
        　　5. First of all, cellphone serves as a convenient way of communication,
since it allows you to chat with others on the phone whenever you like.
        　　6. First, people deal with wastes carelessly. They pay little attention to
the result of the wastes. Second, it is due to the development of
industries.
        　　7. In my opinion, honesty becomes more and more important in recent
society. At the same time the society competition becomes more and more
fierce.
        　　8. We can do a lot of things to entertain ourselves in spare time, like
reading, and listening to music.
        　　9. Personally speaking, friendship is an in-depth relationship combining
trust, support, communication, understanding, empathy, and intimacy, including
aspects of life that all of us crave.
        　　10. Thus, could I make a piece of advice to you that the price of food be
reduced?
        　　英语的句子虽然结构多样，但都是由基本的句子结构演化扩展而来。如果句子不符合基本的句子结构要求，缺少必要成分或者将从句或短语误当作句子，就不能表达一个完整的意思。由于英语和汉语的表达方法和习惯不同，成分残缺是中国学生在英文写作中容易出现的问题。
        　　巩固练习：改正句子。
        　　11. It will please the eyes and mind of others so that produce an excellent
impression.
        　　12. There is still something that not so satisfactory.
        　　13. The wicked always panicky, while the good always faces the reality with
a smile.
        　　14. Always, I dream about the childhood which including happiness and
sadness.
        　　15. I drove slowly past the old brick house. The place where I grew up.
        　　16. Before I turn on the microwave oven. I have to turn off the overhead
light in the kitchen. Otherwise the fuse blows.
        　　17. My mother likes watching daytime television shows. Especially old
movies and soap operas.
        　　18. I wonder now why I have to learn certain subjects. Such as
Geometry.
        　　19. Every other day, Kara runs two miles. Then does fifty sit-ups. She
hasn't lost weight, but she looks slimmer and more muscular.
        　　20. I like all kinds of fresh pizza. But refuse to eat frozen pizza. The
sauce is always dried out, and the crust tastes like leather.
        　　解析：
        　　11. It will please the eyes and mind of others so that it may produce an
excellent impression.
        　　12. There is still something that is not so satisfactory.
        　　13. The wicked always panic, while the good always face the reality with
smiles.
        　　14. Always, I dream about the childhood with happiness and sadness.
        　　15. I drove slowly past the old brick house where I grew up.
        　　16. Before I turn on the microwave oven, I have to turn off the overhead
light in the kitchen. Otherwise the fuse blows.
        　　17. My mother likes watching daytime television shows, especially old
movies and soap operas.
        　　18. I wonder now why I have to learn certain subjects, such as
Geometry.
        　　19. Every other day, Kara runs two miles. Then she does fifty sit-ups. She
hasn't lost weight, but she looks slimmer and more muscular.
        　　20. I like all kinds of fresh pizza, but I refuse to eat frozen pizza. The
sauce is always dried out, and the crust tastes like leather.