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  Directions: You're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, "Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I've done it hundreds of time."You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
          Outlines:
          1. 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。

          2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命
          3. 学生也是这样,不刻苦学习,终究不会成为有用之才
          【优秀范文】
          Nothing Scucceeds Without a Strong Willby commenting on the humorous saying, "Quitting smoking is the eaiest thing in the world. I'va done it hundreds of times." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
          As the proverb says “It's easier said than done”. It’s a truth universally acknowledged that a strong will leads to success. However, many individuals fail to achieve success due to lack of a strong will. There are several reasons attributing to it.
          Among all these factors, the most indispensible one is the lack of persistence. Most people keep on saying that they’d like to quit smoking, yet they fail to give it up. Furthermore, those who seldom attach great importance to what they would accomplish cannot succeed. They are unconscious of what matters during the process.
          Taking all above-mentioned factors into consideration, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that success needs a strong will and persistence. Awareness of the significance of the matter is critical. Only in this way can we make great progress and eventually achieve success.
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